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*ACTIVATED*TD-5631/DarthGrace/ SWAT OFFICER # 023


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I still count 12 holes (it's partially covered by the shoulder bell).

I thought it was something like the rivet shape on the abs plate or the exact number of open teeth on the frown or the right number of bumps on the ears... ^_^

Anyway not being a CRL requirement don't worry at all. ^_^

here the uncut shot

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I don't wanna see anyone unhappy, we make this for passion and for charity, but I am also a pixel fans and I like point this out if someone wants push his limits even further. ^_^

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Chris,

I think overall you have a really nice looking SWAT submission. Have you considered closing the back of your thighs permanently? You may need to shim the backs if your legs are big, but I think it would be a nice improvement.

Keep up the hard work... This is what SWAT is all about!

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Chris,

I think overall you have a really nice looking SWAT submission. Have you considered closing the back of your thighs permanently? You may need to shim the backs if your legs are big, but I think it would be a nice improvement.

Keep up the hard work... This is what SWAT is all about!

I was thinking about that myself. Closing the backs will really help the detail

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Hi, Chris!

Thanks for posting updates of your armor/gear. You are definitely on the right path. Nice job! :td::thumbsup:

Due to different details in various armor models (i.e. notches in forearms, Missing rivet detail on ab plate mid section, etc...) We will have to confirm what is acceptable with the Senior Commanders. Hang in there, SWAT status is closer than you think.

Let's continue...

MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2)

Name: Chris Grace

Legion ID #: TD-5631

Forum Name: DarthGrace

Garrison: Excelsior

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: Roadblock Captain / "Move Along"

I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK

b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK

c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK

d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK

e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK

f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK

g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK

h.) Brow -- CHECK

i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

j.) Weathering: CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

** CHECKED AND CLEARED **

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas Straps -- CHECK

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK

c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK

d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK

e.) Biceps -- CHECK

f.) Forearms -- (SEE COMMENTS)

g.) Pauldron -- CHECK

h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK

I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK

j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK

m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK

n.) Boots -- CHECK

o.) Gloves -- CHECK

p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK

q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK

r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- (SEE COMMENTS)

s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK

t.) Pouches -- (SEE COMMENTS)

u.) Weathering -- CHECK

v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

You're almost there, Brother! Your armor / gear is looking fantastic! Some details are under discussion. But overall, you're getting real close. Stand by...

Some notes:

1.) See if you can 'flatten' out the small tool pouch on your shoulder MP-40. Maybe put a wood block in there or something similar. The 'floppy' look throws off the appearance a bit...

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2.) Need to reshape the end edge of your knee ammo plate to match the screen cap...

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3.) Need to see pics of repaired Thigh armor backs.

4.) Checking to see if Ab Rivet / Disc detail is required.

5.) Checking to see if number of notches on forearm armor is a factor.

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3 (Move Along)

a.) Details -- (See Comments)

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Impressive looking pack, Troop. Nice work!

Here are some notes:

1.) No lab pipe on this version

2.) Need to see close-up pic of 'drilled hole' detail in upper section of mortar tube above the detonator plate.

3.) Try to replicate the 'shotgun shell' positioning

4.) Need to add Wire detail around radio midsection with (close to) accurate twist appearance at the wire connect points on right side of radio.

5.) Need to change the stinger. Too thin. (See ref pics below)

6.) Need to mount radar dish on a slightly lager black disc. (See screen cap) *DIRTY BOY ' carries the screen accurate dish/assembly. Please contact him. It will definitely enhance the accuracy in appearance. (See ref pics below)

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B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

IV.) WEAPON: E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

** CHECKED AND CLEARED **

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

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Here are some progress pics:

drilled hole in mortar tube:

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more rounded end to right ide ot thigh ammo strap:

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filled in tool pouch on shoulder strap:

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Hoping to have everything on the backpack finished this weekend except the larger black disc behind the tupper ware piece. I need to find a replacement for that.

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here are the pics of the fixed left thigh:

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(right thigh but this was not broken)

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New Radio (lined up with upper tool box and siphon):

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No Lab Pipe:

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Wire Around Radio with Rabbit Ear Tie off:

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Slightly Larger Black Disc in Back of Tupper Ware Disc:

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new stinger:

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Great work, Chris!

Your armor/gear is coming along! Very impressive mods, my friend! :td::thumbsup:

Reminder, if any other notable mod requests come up before the end of review, I will let you know!

Just a heads up, when you have completed the mods, we need to see an updated front, back and sides views of you in full (armor/ pack/ weapon) setup for a final look from the Senior Commanders.

Let's continue...

MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 3)

Name: Chris Grace

Legion ID #: TD-5631

Forum Name: DarthGrace

Garrison: Excelsior

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: Roadblock Captain / "Move Along"

I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK

b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK

c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK

d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK

e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK

f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK

g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK

h.) Brow -- CHECK

i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

j.) Weathering: CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

** CHECKED AND CLEARED **

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas Straps -- CHECK

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK

c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK

d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK

e.) Biceps -- CHECK

f.) Forearms -- (SEE COMMENTS)

g.) Pauldron -- CHECK

h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK

I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK

j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)

k.) Thighs -- (SEE COMMENTS)

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK

m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK

n.) Boots -- CHECK

o.) Gloves -- CHECK

p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK

q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK

r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK

s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK

t.) Pouches -- CHECK

u.) Weathering -- CHECK

v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

You're getting close to completing the requirements for this section. Excellent work so far! (* Shoulder Pouch and knee ammo plate rivet)

I'm listing a copy of the remaining notes from Review Post # 2 here for reference. Also, listing a mod request that was missed on the previous passes... (see below)

1.) Checking to see if Ab Rivet / Disc detail is required. (Stand by)

2.) Checking to see if number of notches on forearm armor is a factor. (Stand by)

3.) Need to see the fixed right thigh back. (Nice work on fixing left thigh back, btw)

** 4.) Need to reshape the top edges of the thigh armor to accurately match the screen appearance.

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B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3 (Move Along)

a.) Details -- (See Comments)

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

One more mod and you'll be set with this section of the review! (Nice work putting the Drilled Hole detail on the Mortar Tube, adding the new black backing base to the disc, replacing the 'Bee Stinger' and attaching the new radio w/ wire detail!)

I'll just list the remaining note from Preview Post # 2 here for reference:

1.) Waiting to see the updated 'shotgun shell' positioning (You noted that this will be taken care of shortly)

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B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

IV.) WEAPON: E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

** CHECKED AND CLEARED **

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

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Here is the new and improved shotgun shell placement:

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I will shape the thighs this week and re-submit my photos. I have not given up, just busy with work and real life (helping a friend build a house from the ground up). Thanks for the encouragement everyone.

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