Hi Matt, **** I swear I really missed this thread. Sorry about that. ><
OK now lets see.
I agree with Robert, if you can make the black borders in the traps or tears thinner, that will look a lot better. Like in the movies. But won't stop you from deployment either way.
Secondly I see that your frown outline is painted gray as well. The CRL isn't very specific about this but I would recommend only the teeth be painted grey.
Maybe a bit more dirt on the boots will be nice as well.
Good luck for deployment!