Good morning Josh,
I have seen your changes, so let´s go for the second Review:
Application Review (Part 2)
Name: Josh Delaney
Legion ID: 10290
Forum Name: jdelaney
Garrison: UK Garrison - Imperial Welsh Squad
Helmet
a. Green lenses: check
b. Paint color of traps / tears: check
c. Correct number of teeth: check
d. Mic tips: check
e. Vocoder color: check
f. Tube stripes: check
g. Rank bar on ears: check
h. Brow: check
i. Side screws (ears): check
j. Weathering: check
Result on Helmet:
Check and cleared
Armor details
a. Elastic straps shoulders: check
b. Neck seal: check
c. Black undersuit: check
d. Shoulder bells: check
e. Biceps: check
f. Forearms: check
g. Pauldron: check
h. Chest / back plate: check
i. Kidney / butt plate: check
j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check
k. Strapping system: check
l. Thighs: check
m. shins / calves: check
n. sniper plate: check
o. boots: check
p. gloves: check
q. hand plates / guards: check
r. ammo belt (waist): check
s. ammo belt (right knee): check
t. canvas belt: check
u. pouches: check
v. weathering: check: check
Result on Armor:
check and cleared
Backpack
a. details: check
b. weathering: check
RESULT ON BACKPACK
check and cleared
Weapon
a. details: check
b. weathering: check
RESULT ON WEAPONS
CHECKED & CLEARED
I've discovered one more thing but I'm sure you'll change it: Please shorten the belt a little bit or do some weathering on it (inside):
Otherwise, I can only say:
You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department! You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.
Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.
We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.
Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared
bigwam - MEPD Deployment Officer