Heroma97 Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 NAME: Martin Herodek Legion ID #: TD-22997 Forum Name: Heroma97 Garrison: German Garrison Deployed Police Officer: Yes Mos Espa Security Patrol Trooper Emulated: Captain - Docking Bay 94 Version Hello Troops. I finished modify my armor and backpack to try to get SWAT. This are my pics and my builtthread: Tunisia DLT: Backpack: Ok, let´s go: Some Action Pics: Here some comparative Images. The Problem is the reslution here on the PC. On my Handy, i can see more Details, then here on the PC. Also the weathering is stronger on the pics on the Handy and on the TV, than on the PC: There is one Problem with the black/White Picture. The contrast is stronger than on the Coloured Pictures or in the Film. Example: It seams, the weathering is stronger on the Pauldron, but in the film it isn´t so. I showed the blackwhite Picture, than the weathering Details are more visible there. The stripe on the right forearm is better visible on some screenshots of the Film. More Details: I hope the Emperor keeps me well enough for his elite Groups. Thanks, Martin. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenFriday77 Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Good luck Martin!! Really nice work!TD 31037 reporting in!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwam Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Well done, my son! Good luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hausi Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Nice work and attention to details.... and an awesome blaster! Good luck bro! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroma97 Posted September 12, 2017 Author Share Posted September 12, 2017 Thanks Ben, Dad & Urs. I forgot the pic from the Glove/Cheesegraterdetail Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoveMonkey Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Looks really good, good luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroma97 Posted September 12, 2017 Author Share Posted September 12, 2017 Thank you Kirk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spOOL68 Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Good luck Martin! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TD42115 Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 Looking good trooper, gap between chest and shoulder bells might be an issue, i ran into the same thing on my application.. Fingers crossed you dont.. Great attention to details.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroma97 Posted September 13, 2017 Author Share Posted September 13, 2017 Thanks, the problem is - When i wear the backpack normal, the distance is correct. You can see this on my PO pictures. But this trooper, has the strap over the shoulder bell and the strap pulls the bell slightly backwards. This makes the gap larger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airborne Trooper Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 Amazing work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroma97 Posted September 14, 2017 Author Share Posted September 14, 2017 Thank you Jason. Today I have changed this detail against an accurate one. I got it today. And now: lean back and wait ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beren Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Looking good Martin! This is the same trooper I emulated in my SWAT application, but Photoshop has shut me down and won't display my photos. I think you've done a nice job with this... at most, I see perhaps a few tweaks needed in your weathering including the pack, but otherwise very nice. Good luck with your submission. Glad to have another Docking Bay 94 coming aboard! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcalus Posted September 17, 2017 Share Posted September 17, 2017 Looking good. Best of luck!Sent from my SM-G930W8 using Tapatalk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SID Posted September 20, 2017 Share Posted September 20, 2017 Direction proper, good luck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroma97 Posted September 21, 2017 Author Share Posted September 21, 2017 Thanks for your opinions! Now i´m really nervous and waiting for the first review. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felice Posted September 21, 2017 Share Posted September 21, 2017 Hi Martin, I will start with your Review soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felice Posted September 22, 2017 Share Posted September 22, 2017 Hi Martin! I will start your Review with a big CHEERS: Happy Birthday! Your gear is on spot and your emulated trooper is immediately recognizable. But each new SWAT candidate gets looked at even more so from the previous trooper and the bar gets raised even higher. You are definitely on the right track though. As stated before, we always stress patience during this process as we pay more and more attention to fine tuning with each new SWAT applicant. The MEPD Senior Commanders and myself will give your armor a full inspection and Review. Some details may definitely be missed and re-checked, but we will try to catch them on every pass given until you are cleared and ready to join the Special Weapons & Tactics Team, brother! With that said, let us begin......... So let's start...... MEPD SWAT OFFICER: Application review part 1 Name: Martin Herodek Legion ID: 22997 Forum Name: Heroma97 Garrison: German Garrison ANH Santrooper selected: Captain Docking Bay 94 Helmet Green Lenses: check Paint Color on Traps / Tears: check Paint Color and Number of Teeth: check Mic Tips: check Vocoder Color: check Tube Stripes: check Rank Bar: check Brow: check Side Screws (ears): check Weathering: check Specials (ears): check **Additional comments** Nothing to add. Your bucket is on spot for me:-) **RESULT ON HELMET** STAND BY Armor / Suit Details Canvas Straps: check Neck Seal: check Black Undersuit: check Shoulder Bells: check Biceps: check Forearms: check Pauldron: see comments Chest / Back Plate: check Kidney / Butt Plate: check Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod: check Strapping: check Tighs: check Shins / Calves: check Sniper Plate: check Boots: check Gloves: check Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge: check Ammo Belt (right knee): check Canvas Belt: check Pouches: check Weathering: see comments Crotch Snaps: check **Additional Comments** Left leg: I like to see a Little bit more weathering and different Patterns on your left leg The spot on your right thight is a Little bit too strong 1. I can't see the spot on the reference picture 2. Like the first Feedback Picture: just Play a Little bit more with the weathering. The left leg is more dirty as the right one 3. Missing the spot on your pauldron 4. Can't finde the spot on the reference picture **RESULT ON ARMOR** STAND BY Backpack Details: check Weathering: check **Additional Comments** nothing to add. Great pack! **RESULT ON BACKPACK** STAND BY Weapon: DLT-19 Details: check Weathering: check **Additional Comments** Welcome to the Bapty World! **RESULT ON WEAPON** APPROVED Alright Martin! The Hardware is on spot. Just some weathering details missing but I think you will add/Change them in some minutes. Good luck and Cheers, Felix Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroma97 Posted September 22, 2017 Author Share Posted September 22, 2017 Thank you Felix for the Review. I am happy that there are no more points for critic I will do the weathering details next week, after the Speyer Event. Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hausi Posted September 22, 2017 Share Posted September 22, 2017 Sounds good mate, not too much work, piece of cake for you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airborne Trooper Posted September 22, 2017 Share Posted September 22, 2017 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spOOL68 Posted September 22, 2017 Share Posted September 22, 2017 Really close now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroma97 Posted September 25, 2017 Author Share Posted September 25, 2017 Ok, today - i worked on the weathering. So, let me Show you the result: First, i removed the spots: Point 1 and 4 on Felix´ list. Then i weathered the left leg more the the right: Point two on Felix´ list And i weathered the Pauldron more, with the Spots, he said: Point 3 on the list. The Spot on the thight, i made him slightly brighter. And at last - i shortened the Cover stripes on the forearms, like you said. Here are the new pics: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenFriday77 Posted September 25, 2017 Share Posted September 25, 2017 Looks really good Martin!TD 31037 reporting in!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felice Posted September 27, 2017 Share Posted September 27, 2017 Hi Martin! welcome back to your second Review. MEPD SWAT OFFICER: Application review part 2 Name: Martin Herodek Legion ID: 22997 Forum Name: Heroma97 Garrison: German Garrison ANH Santrooper selected: Captain Docking Bay 94 Helmet Green Lenses: check Paint Color on Traps / Tears: check Paint Color and Number of Teeth: check Mic Tips: check Vocoder Color: check Tube Stripes: check Rank Bar: check Brow: check Side Screws (ears): check Weathering: check Specials (ears): check **Additional comments** Nothing to add. Your bucket is on spot for me:-) **RESULT ON HELMET** STAND BY Armor / Suit Details Canvas Straps: check Neck Seal: check Black Undersuit: check Shoulder Bells: check Biceps: check Forearms: check Pauldron: check Chest / Back Plate: check Kidney / Butt Plate: check Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod: check Strapping: check Tighs: check Shins / Calves: check Sniper Plate: check Boots: check Gloves: check Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge: check Ammo Belt (right knee): check Canvas Belt: check Pouches: check Weathering: see comments Crotch Snaps: check **Additional Comments** I am still not 100% happy with your leg weathering on the left side. You used just one (or two) Brown Color(s), right? Try to add some black Color spottings with the dry brush method. And please lighten up the two cycles on your right shin a Little bit, ok? **RESULT ON ARMOR** STAND BY Backpack Details: check Weathering: check **Additional Comments** nothing to add. Great pack! **RESULT ON BACKPACK** STAND BY Weapon: DLT-19 Details: check Weathering: check **Additional Comments** Welcome to the Bapty World! **RESULT ON WEAPON** APPROVED Ok Martin, just the Colors and the two circle spots and the Senior Command is your next judge:-) Cheers, Felix Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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