*ACTIVATED*TD-4048 / SID / SWAT OFFICER # 033

[mr_hair]

Nice upgrades to the weathering mate :-)

[SID]

My honor does not allow it any other way, the shoes are in the making. Order placed on TK boots. Waiting for confirmation, I'm on the waiting list. Thank you to my brothers in my way to the top called SWAT.

[SID]

Santa Claus did not bring a gift . What a big harm .

[SID]

I do not think will be celebrate success this year.

[DirtyBoy]

You'll get there brother

[trooper1]

No worries bro! You'll get there!

What size boot do you need? I'll keep an eye out here for them as well

[SID]

Thanks brothers for good words .

I have order boots from TK boots . I waiting for confirm . They answer to me . They say they waiting for new pair boots .

My size of boots is 11 .

[trooper1]

Copy

[SID]

What brother mean?

[SID]

We are waiting for the boots which are due in a week.

Once they arrive we will e-mail everyone on our back order lists and we will continue down the lists until everything has shipped.

This answer i get from them .

[kayelbe]

What brother mean?

It just means he heard and understands your last message. Not sure how it translates to Polish. For example, when a airplane pilot receives an instruction from the control tower, he would respond "Copy" or "Copy that" to acknowledge he received and understood.

[TD-1408]

Good work Sid

[SID]

It just means he heard and understands your last message. Not sure how it translates to Polish. For example, when a airplane pilot receives an instruction from the control tower, he would respond "Copy" or "Copy that" to acknowledge he received and understood.

Thanks for the explanation.

[Jonboy2312]

EN: Looks great! The assembly and details (straps etc.) all look perfect, at least to my eyes.

Where I would see a bit of room for improvement is the weathering... mind you, this is just my personal opinion (as a comic artist / photographer / videographer).

You see, the dirt is distributed rather evenly everywhere, it looks like a printed camo pattern. I firmly believe the most exposed surfaces, like all protruding edges, and large bulging areas (front of chest, sides of thighs, etc), should be nearly clean, as they would be constantly exposed to rubbing. The dirt would mostly stick in grooves and in recessed areas. A great tool for that is a piece of rag with a bit of acetone soaked in it. After you've rubbed a bit of paint off chosen areas, the rag is still holding diluted paint which you can dab onto other areas, creating a very visually appealing hazy layer of "dusty" dirt wherever you want. You can see that on my helmet dome on the attached picture.

Also, like others have already pointed out, there's not enough "desert" color... and a lot of black. Black should be used very, very sparingly, IMHO. I find Krylon desert camo paint works really well as it's more gray than yellow, and mixes well with their brown camo as well.

Remember, this is just a humble trooper's personal opinion, I'm not the one reviewing your application. But Gerardo Follano himself really likes my weathering, so that's gotta count for something

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PL: Wygląda znakomicie! Montaż i detale (uprząż itd.) wygladają perfekcyjnie, przynajmniej jak na moje oko...

Niemniej moim skromnym zdaniem (jako artysty/rysownika/foto/videografa ) jest wciąż trochę miejsca na poprawę brudzingu. Widzisz, jest naciapane wszędzie i bardzo równomiernie, wygląda to prawie jak wyblakły wzór kamuflażu na wojskowym mundurze. Osobiście uważam stanowczo, że najbardziej wyeksponowane powierzchnie, jak wszystkie wystające krawędzie oraz duże, wypukłe powierzchnie (przód klaty, boki ud, itp) powinny być niemal czyste, gdyż byłyby poddane pocieraniu podczas ruchu, od broni, od składowania itp. Brud gromadziłby się głównie w szczelinach i wszelkich wklęsłościach. Idealnym narzędziem do tego, w moim doświadczeniu, jest delikatnie nasączona acetonem szmatka. Po wytarciu wybranej powierzchni masz w ręku szmatkę nasączoną leciutkim roztworem farby - którą teraz możemy naciapać delikatny "kurzysty" nalot na innych częsciach zbroi. Ten efekt zobaczysz np. na czapie mojego hełmu w załączonym zdjęciu.

I ostatnia sprawa, tak jak już inni zuważyli, widać za mało pustynno-kurzystego koloru. Ciemne kolory jak brąz i szczególnie czerń powinny być tylko bardzo oszczędnie i wybiórczo stosowanym uzupełnieniem. Z mojego doświadczenia, Krylon pustynne camo w sprayu sprawdza się znakomicie (daje kolor bardziej szary niż żółty), i wspaniale się komponuje z odrobinką brązu camo tej samej marki.

Pamiętaj, to tylko opinia zwyczajnego kamasza, nie ja rozpatruję Twoją aplikację... ale mój brudzing bardzo się podoba samemu Gerardo Follano... a więc coś w tym chyba jest

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Damian - No worries, Brother!

You are definitely almost there!

[SID]

Thanks brothers for their support in this way to the top.

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Damian - No worries! We'll get you onto the roster before you know it!

[SID]

I can not wait for that day.

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Damian,

Outstanding mod updates!

We'll try to finish you up soon, Troop!

Let's continue...




MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 3)

Name: Damian Jablonski
Legion ID #: TD-4048
Forum Name: SID
Garrison: Polish Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: DESERT SERGEANT


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears)-- CHECK
j.) Weathering: CHECK


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Nice work on the mod request! Nothing more to say here.

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)


II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Need close up pics of:

1.) Elastic Shoulder Straps (No Canvas) / Please post a pic showing the elasticity of the straps.

**PENDING**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



IV.) WEAPON: E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**






B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**REVIEW STILL IN PROGRESS...

[SID]

Today i don't make it . Tomorrow I will do this and I will send photo .

[DirtyBoy]

Helmet high brother you will get there

[SID]

Like I said I did it . Adds photos .

[SCRIBBLER]

Excellent! Review Comments will be posted later today!

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Damian,

Almost there, Brother!

Let's continue...




MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 4)

Name: Damian Jablonski
Legion ID #: TD-4048
Forum Name: SID
Garrison: Polish Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: DESERT SERGEANT


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears)-- CHECK
j.) Weathering: CHECK


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Looks like you are pretty much done, Troop! Good job!

Now we ask that you post final pics of you fully suited up in your armor. (Front, Back Sides) Then we can call this a successful wrap, Brother!

**PENDING**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



IV.) WEAPON: E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**






B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**REVIEW STILL IN PROGRESS...

[millenium1]

Sooooo close Damian!