*ACTIVATED*TD-21112 / VF2112 / SWAT OFFICER # 030

[Vf2112]

Thanks mate appreciated

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Vince

Nice work so far!

We do ask that you continue to compare notes and ask for guidance from these previous SWAT Applicants who have attempted this particular Screen TD (CANTINA CAPTAIN) and were cleared & activated. Their advice will definitely help you reach your goal properly:


MR_HAIR

LORD TRISTE

As a reminder, we always stress PATIENCE during this process as we pay more and more attention to the gear of each new SWAT applicant. The MEPD Senior Commanders and myself will give your armor / gear a full inspection and review. Some details may definitely be missed and re-checked, but we will try to catch them on every pass given until you are cleared and ready to join the Special Weapons & Tactics Team, Brother!

This is shaping up to be to be a challenging project and one of the toughest. Hang in there!

Let's continue...




MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2)

Name: Vince McGann
Legion ID #: TD-21112
Forum Name: Vf2112
Garrison: Southern Cross

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: CANTINA CAPTAIN


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- (SEE COMMENTS)
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
j.) Weathering: (SEE COMMENTS)


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**Close up pics need to be posted of the items marked above in order for us to continue.**

Even though you had pictures taken for your Standard Deployment application. We will still need to see those posted with your SWAT application.

I can comment on what I can see so far with the pics available...

1.) Need to clean up the black lines on the traps and tears.

2.) The 'Joker Grin' needs to be reshaped a bit. (see refs)

3.) Work on the weathering and overall details of the helmet. Fortunately, everything appears in place, you just need to take your time with this. There is no time clock, Brother!

**REFERENCE PICS**

**PENDING**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)


II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b.) Neck Seal -- (SEE COMMENTS)
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- (SEE COMMENTS)
e.) Biceps -- (SEE COMMENTS)
f.) Forearms -- (SEE COMMENTS)
g.) Pauldron -- (SEE COMMENTS)
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- (SEE COMMENTS)
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- (SEE COMMENTS)
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)
k.) Thighs -- (SEE COMMENTS)
l.) Shins / Calves -- (SEE COMMENTS)
m.) Sniper Plate -- (SEE COMMENTS)
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- (SEE COMMENTS)
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- (SEE COMMENTS)
s.) Canvas Belt -- (SEE COMMENTS)
t.) Pouches -- (SEE COMMENTS)
u.) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS)
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**Close up pics need to be posted of the items marked above in order for us to continue.**

Even though you had pictures taken for your Standard Deployment application. We will still need to see those posted with your SWAT application.

We still ask that you post pics of yourself in full head to toe armor & gear showing Front, Back, Sides. with backpack on and off.

As requested in the first review, What is the make of the armor? This will help in assisting you with what mods are needed. The ab section will definitely need work. We recommend that you mod the area and add the TD Ab insert for a cleaner look.

As stated before, I can review and comment on what I can see so far with the pics available...

1.) The chest weathering pattern matches that of the 'STOP THAT SHIP" Trooper. You may want to refer to the pics of the SWAT Officers that were deployed using that Trooper as a reference guide for weathering and some of the details.

2.) Make sure that the shoulder straps are elastic / not canvas. (show pics)

3.) Your waist pouches are fine, but you may need to mod or replace your shoulder canvas pouch to match the screen version in shape and appearance.
4.) As stated in the helmet section, please work on the weathering and overall details of your armor and gear. Take your time with this. Use the references of the SWAT members who chose this TD before you. Their assistance will definitely help!

** You are on the right track and off to a great start despite the red flags. But again, don't allow yourself to become frustrated. We will be here for you every step of the way. Just stay committed and patient. You'll get there soon enough, Brother!

**REFERENCE PICS**

**PENDING**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b..) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS)


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**Close up pics need to be posted of the front section(s) and sides in order for us to continue.**

1.) Try to match the shape of the lab pipe detail

2.) The Radio Dial looks better, but try to match up the details as close as you can with the reference below

4.) The Bee Stinger needs to be updated to look as similar to the Screen Caps. Either Dirty Boy's or Quartermaster's is highly recommended. *If you can get your hands on the vintage 'scout canteen' recently found to replicate the look of the stinger assembly , this will get you bonus points. (see forum topic on this subject)

5.) The "Cross" shaped Electrical tape detail on the above left side tool box needs to match angle positioning and shape of the reference pics.

**REFERENCE PICS**

**PENDING**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



IV.) WEAPON: DLT-19

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b..) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS)

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Much, much better!

Still would like to see:

1.) A little more weathering / detailing overall / still looks a bit 'new'.

**REFERENCE PICS**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**REVIEW STILL IN PROGRESS...

[Vf2112]

Wow haha I'm pretty glad I came in late to swat program so when I'm done

It will be awesome with all the addition found and added through other builds

Be rough with me

I'm really loving this

Although I'm a little confused in black lines around traps but will work it out

Have been going through all swat builds but might have to bother some of you with questions soon sorry

Thanks guys again sporty wasn't more prepared but was only way to kick myself into gear and get it done

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Vince - No worries, Brother! Nothing like earning it. You'll feel better at the end of this process.

The important thing is that you heed all requests made in the review threads.

Just a quick response to the 'lines'. Just have them look a little smoother / tighter. A little more solid / not as squiggly.

[Vf2112]

Np cheers mike

[SCRIBBLER]

[Vf2112]

One more thing mike wats wrong with my shoulder pouch from wat I see do I need to shorten flap on bottom attached pouch and lengthen strap?

[SCRIBBLER]

Lengthen (per reference pics)

[Vf2112]

Cool thanks again

[Vf2112]

Although I'm researching hard stil so much I'm missing or not understanding so thanks for the help guys

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Vince - Rest assured that we will help you all the way to SWAT activation, Brother! Just hang in there and try not to get discouraged during the process. You will get there!

[Vf2112]

Question;

I believe the top of the lab pipe is trumpeted not square like those passed for swat previously

And the bottom doesn't have a smaller tube coming out

Am I wrong

This is how I have it but I think I should cut bottom off and trumpet the top

I've lengthened strap but is it to long ?

Correct dial on radio

Traps/tears thinned n evened out better

DLT weathered

[Vf2112]

Trying to get armour pics happening but with kids n extremely cold weather and catching someone to take photos all at the same time it's Kaos here

But have still to modify ab plate so hopefully soon sorry

[mr_hair]

Vince, with the radio dial, if you cut out a piece of clear plastic & stick it over the top, it gives a really nice finish to the radio. Stops it from looking quite so much like a sticker. I cut mine a little bigger than the decal so that it sits a bit further away to give it more depth. Just clear plastic from some packaging will do mate.

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Vince - Excellent progress!

1.) Lab Pipe - This is acceptable. No need to cut. But, you can if you choose to do so.

2.) Radio Dial - Looks much better. *Also, James's advice on the clear plastic will be a nice touch to the overall look, but isn't required.

3.) Shoulder Pouch - Strap Length is perfect

4.) Traps & Tears - Perfect.

5.) DLT-19 - Spot on.

* Note - All these mods definitely put you on the right track. We will wait for the full body shots of you wearing the armor and gear.

I'll also be away this weekend and will continue reviewing your gear first thing Monday morning if you have any new pics to share.

Have a great weekend, Mate!

[Vf2112]

Very cool thanks guys

Thanks James I did do that on last dial and shall do again I found the best thing for it was the plastic strip that comes with a iPhone screen saver

Cheers mike haveva good week end

[Vf2112]

Replaced ab plate

Upgraded bee stinger

Looks ok on pack but is stinger to long?

Hoping to get full armour shots tomorrow

[Vf2112]

Ok took some shots I'm not overly happy with on my phone

Could of used some adjusting of pouch n tighten pack straps but couldn't tell that till I looked at them

It's 5 degrees n just started raining as I suited up

Of course

[Vf2112]

Also sanded n reprinted lunchbox and adjusted position of tape

And cut bottom off lab pipe

[Beren]

Vince,

It's nice to see the entire armor all together. Some of your parts appear to be a bit loose, notably the thighs and shins. Have you considered trying to improve the taper on the legs to get a better fit?

[Vf2112]

Hi Beren

They actually fit really well i think I had thighs a little high

And the calves are pretty snug too

No padding at all like some use

Anything else that stands out?

Any help is great

I'm waiting for word on chest weathering pattern and weather it needs lightening before I match the rest of armour as sometimes you can't tell in real life you need that photo view

[Vf2112]

I have to say I love my armour with it's current improvements and can't wait to see what more can be done to make it better for swat status

[mr_hair]

Like Pete said, great to see some full shots. Looking good mate.

[Vf2112]

Any suggestions mr hair

[mr_hair]

Well, I would make the thigh shape a bit more screen accurate, like this...

...but it's really for Scribbler to say, not me