Dude, your kit looks pretty good! I am also a SCG guy, I am in Long Beach.
A couple of things I see:
1. Your left shin looks odd, almost warped? Perhaps it is just the way you have it on in these pictures?
2. As Airborne said, I would close the gap between the back plate and kidney, but honestly, with your pack on, it wont matter. And you will need to submit pics with your pack on. Click on the link Airborne provided above to see all the pics that required for submittal. there is quite a few!
3. Some the CRL's changed a bit last year. Go here http://forum.mepd.net/index.php?/forum/54-crl-updates/ to see the changes as you will need to make them before submitting.
Looking good dude! Good luck!