m4vrick Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 Hello friends, please bear with me, this be my PO submission: Vincent William TD-17778http://501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=23804 m4vrick Garuda Garrison Indonesia Pardon my non smiling picture.. been a long day NOTE: (RE-POST 3 Nov 2017): Sorry guys, i just had to toss away the previous pics and post these new ones, since my review hasn't started. I totally wasn't happy with the 1st one. To be honest, that was taken in a haste. So i hope these new pictures will make it easier on the reviewers. Two things that changed: 1. Corrected canvas pouches position on shoulder. 2. Corrected backpack (pulled higher) to align better. Was slanted at the beginning. 3. Pulled thighs inwards. They now look better. Backpack: Bucket: T-21: Attitude pose: Constructive criticisms always welcomed. I hope you enjoyed it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ironguts Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 Nice job! Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Pro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCRIBBLER Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 @ Vincent - Your review has begun, Troop! First comments will be posted soon. Stand by... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hausi Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 Hi Vincent, Your armor looks awesome, same goes for your pack and I really like your weathering! Seems to me that you are going either for the cantina captain or docking bay? I can definitely see your attention to detail although some changes would become necessary as soon as you decide going for SWAT... but not too many Don't forget to add some pics of the six rivets on your left side, codpiece and buttplate rivets, as well as the male backside of the snap on the right side of your abdomen. The only thing that seems wrong to me at first sight is the shoulder pouch which is sitting way too high, try to move it down. Good luck with your review mate! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m4vrick Posted November 1, 2017 Author Share Posted November 1, 2017 Thank you @hausi. Yes, i am trying emulate captain cantina. And thank you for the feedbacks. Will post all the necessary corrections together once the first review comes out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m4vrick Posted November 1, 2017 Author Share Posted November 1, 2017 Some more that i missed. I'll just post these now.. Thank you all! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoveMonkey Posted November 1, 2017 Share Posted November 1, 2017 Good luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YVH Posted November 2, 2017 Share Posted November 2, 2017 Good luck!!Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airborne Trooper Posted November 2, 2017 Share Posted November 2, 2017 Remove the white paint off the cod piece split rivet. You're armor and pack look amazing! Pull up your pack and tighten the straps a tad and that should solve your issue with the pouch being too high! Rotate your thighs inwards some as they are facing outwards too much. Very minor issues. Add some weathering to that beautiful pack! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felice Posted November 2, 2017 Share Posted November 2, 2017 Hi Vincent, I will start with your review at the weekend! Thank you and Cheers, Felice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felice Posted November 5, 2017 Share Posted November 5, 2017 Hi Vincent! Welcome and thank you for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer! Let us start with your Review. Application Review Name: Vincent Williams Legion ID: 17778 Forum Name: m4vrick Garrison: Garuda Garrison Indonesia Helmet a. Green lenses: check b. Paint color of traps / tears: check c. Correct number of teeth: check d. Mic tips: check e. Vocoder color: check f. Tube stripes: check g. Rank bar on ears: check h. Brow: check i. Side screws (ears): check j. Weathering: check *additional comments* RESULT ON HELMET Checked & Cleared Armor details a. Elastic straps shoulders: check b. Neck seal: check c. Black undersuit: check d. Shoulder bells: check e. Biceps: check f. Forearms: check g. Pauldron: check h. Chest / back plate: check i. Kidney / butt plate: check j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check k. Strapping system: check l. Thighs: check m. shins / calves: check n. sniper plate: check o. boots: check p. gloves: check q. hand plates / guards: check r. ammo belt (waist): check s. ammo belt (right knee): check t. canvas belt: check u. pouches: check v. weathering: check *additional comments* RESULT ON ARMOR Checked & Cleared Backpack a. details: check b. weathering: see comments *additional comments* Please add some weathering on you pac. RESULT ON BACKPACK Pending Weapon a. details: check b. weathering: check *additional comments* If you like to go for SWAT you have to change the front nozzle a little bit... RESULT ON WEAPONS CHECKED & CLEARED You are pretty close Vince! Just some dirty patrols with your pack und you are in! Cheers, Felix Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m4vrick Posted November 5, 2017 Author Share Posted November 5, 2017 Thank you fellas ! Pleasant surprise for me this Monday morning. Will get right on the corrections! Vincent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m4vrick Posted November 7, 2017 Author Share Posted November 7, 2017 Weathered my pack now. Please let me know if this suffice: Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airborne Trooper Posted November 7, 2017 Share Posted November 7, 2017 Awesome!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TD42115 Posted November 7, 2017 Share Posted November 7, 2017 Looks awesome, nice job on the kit.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m4vrick Posted November 11, 2017 Author Share Posted November 11, 2017 Thank you kind sirs... i’ve already done some preparations for the next level move along... move along Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felice Posted November 14, 2017 Share Posted November 14, 2017 Hi Vincent! Welcome back to our PO Programm! Let us start with the second Review... Application Review Name: Vincent Williams Legion ID: 17778 Forum Name: m4vrick Garrison: Garuda Garrison Indonesia Helmet a. Green lenses: check b. Paint color of traps / tears: check c. Correct number of teeth: check d. Mic tips: check e. Vocoder color: check f. Tube stripes: check g. Rank bar on ears: check h. Brow: check i. Side screws (ears): check j. Weathering: check *additional comments* RESULT ON HELMET Checked & Cleared Armor details a. Elastic straps shoulders: check b. Neck seal: check c. Black undersuit: check d. Shoulder bells: check e. Biceps: check f. Forearms: check g. Pauldron: check h. Chest / back plate: check i. Kidney / butt plate: check j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check k. Strapping system: check l. Thighs: check m. shins / calves: check n. sniper plate: check o. boots: check p. gloves: check q. hand plates / guards: check r. ammo belt (waist): check s. ammo belt (right knee): check t. canvas belt: check u. pouches: check v. weathering: check *additional comments* RESULT ON ARMOR Checked & Cleared Backpack a. details: check b. weathering: check *additional comments* RESULT ON BACKPACK CHECKED & CLEARED Weapon a. details: check b. weathering: check *additional comments* If you like to go for SWAT you have to change the front nozzle a little bit... RESULT ON WEAPONS CHECKED & CLEARED Congrats Vincent! You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements. Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away. We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon. Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared FELICE - MEPD Deployment Officer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hausi Posted November 14, 2017 Share Posted November 14, 2017 Congratulations Vincent, well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m4vrick Posted November 14, 2017 Author Share Posted November 14, 2017 Thanks guys... gotta really thank @Felice and the command staff for your time. Sincerely thank you all for your time, you who do your dailies, and yet still spare your time to uphold MEPD's standard for our beloved hobby Star Wars, specifically Sandtroopers ! Salute! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airborne Trooper Posted November 14, 2017 Share Posted November 14, 2017 Congratulations, Vincent. Very very very much well deserved! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spOOL68 Posted November 14, 2017 Share Posted November 14, 2017 Congrats!!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthStevius Posted November 15, 2017 Share Posted November 15, 2017 Yay! Another PO! well done Vincent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rolf Posted November 15, 2017 Share Posted November 15, 2017 Nice suit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TD42115 Posted November 21, 2017 Share Posted November 21, 2017 Another for the sandbox, congrats. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 27, 2017 Share Posted November 27, 2017 Brilliant work Vincent, and congratulations on your approval Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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