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@ Anthony...

Your gear is coming along nicely. A few more mod updates and you will be among the Elite, Brother!



*As stated before, we always stress PATIENCE during this process as we pay more and more attention to fine tuning with each new SWAT applicant. The MEPD Senior Commanders and myself will give your armor / gear a full inspection and review. Some details may definitely be missed and re-checked, but we will try to catch them on every pass given until you are cleared and ready to join the Special Weapons & Tactics Team, Brother! :td::thumbsup:

Let's continue...





MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2)

Name: Anthony (Tony) Jobe
Legion ID #: TD-10116
Forum Name: UKSWRATH
Garrison: Golden Gate Garrison


** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: CANTINA CAPTAIN


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses --
CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
j.) Weathering: CHECK


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:




**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- (SEE COMMENTS)
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- (SEE COMMENTS)
u.) Weathering -- CHECK
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Mod request(s) on the following...

1.) Shoulder pouch tool section flap strap needs to be lengthened

2.) Need to reshape top sections of thighs (See ref pics)

3.) Re-adjust the positioning of your shoulder pouch to match the reference pics a little more closely

** More mod requests may be posted later as your review continues. Certain minor details might possibly be missed with numerous review passes. Stand by.

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B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Nice work! This section is completed! :thumbsup:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:((Comments Pending)

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)


IV.) WEAPON: DLT-19

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**




B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**CHECKED & CLEARED**


C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**REVIEW STILL IN PROGRESS...

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Hi Tony,

you know that i don't like the FX (in Germany we have a saying: I carry my heart on my tongue ;-)) BUT: you did a great job with your tights!!!

For me SWAT is not only to have an accurate armor....for me SWAT is to get deep into the build and to love what you make.

You are on the right way!

Just one note: i would say that the weathering of the chest armor is the same of this guy

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So check the weathering of the chest...

Good luck!

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@ Anthony...

You are almost there, my friend! The light can bee seen! :yes:



*As stated before, we always stress PATIENCE during this process as we pay more and more attention to fine tuning with each new SWAT applicant. The MEPD Senior Commanders and myself will give your armor / gear a full inspection and review. Some details may definitely be missed and re-checked, but we will try to catch them on every pass given until you are cleared and ready to join the Special Weapons & Tactics Team, Brother! :td::thumbsup:

Let's continue...





MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 3)

Name: Anthony (Tony) Jobe
Legion ID #: TD-10116
Forum Name: UKSWRATH
Garrison: Golden Gate Garrison


** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: CANTINA CAPTAIN


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses --
CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
j.) Weathering: CHECK


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:




**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS)
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Looking at your weathering patterns again, I'd like to request that you give it one more pass at the details. Pay particular attention to the top ab box area. The chest could also use some more 'hits' as well.

You are very close. This simple rework will finally get you over the hump and you can join the ranks, Brother!

The weathering seems a little light. (Try to reference some of the previous SWAT applicants that have chosen this same Trooper version.)

Lastly, we'd like to see one more set of pics with you fully suited up with all updated mods in full view. (Front, back, sides)

Bottom line, VERY nice work. You should be proud of the overall construction!

* Don't mind the helmet references below. You already cleared that section! :thumbsup:

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B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:((Comments Pending)

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)


IV.) WEAPON: DLT-19

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**




B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**REVIEW STILL IN PROGRESS...

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