*ACTIVATED*TD-46800 / MR_HAIR / SWAT OFFICER # 028

[SCRIBBLER]

@ James

Looks like you are ready for the final review from the Senior Commanders!

Great work!

Let's continue...




MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 3)

Name: James Hoy
Legion ID #: TD-46800
Forum Name: Mr_Hair
Garrison: UK Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: CANTINA CAPTAIN


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
j.) Weathering: CHECK


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

The brow looks fantastic! Nice work!

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**





B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



IV.) WEAPON: DLT-19

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**




B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**STAND BY FOR FINAL REVIEW FROM THE C.O. & X.O....

[SCRIBBLER]

@ James

Almost there!

Let's continue...




MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 4)

Name: James Hoy
Legion ID #: TD-46800
Forum Name: Mr_Hair
Garrison: UK Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: CANTINA CAPTAIN


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
j.) Weathering: CHECK


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**





B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)



IV.) WEAPON: DLT-19

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**




B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**STAND BY FOR FINAL REVIEW FROM THE C.O. ....

[DirtyBoy]

Ok....first of I want to say AWESOME job with your build man.....The only thing I can see that you could improve upon would be the chest plate weathering (unless you've already updated) it seems like the patterns are all there but just a little heavy in places. more white needs to show through. Does that make sense?

[SCRIBBLER]

@ James

Final review being conducted by the C.O.

Let's continue...




MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 5)

Name: James Hoy
Legion ID #: TD-46800
Forum Name: Mr_Hair
Garrison: UK Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: CANTINA CAPTAIN


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
j.) Weathering: CHECK


** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Shoulder Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS)
v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK


** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

Just a little bit more lighter on the chest pattern and you should be good to go.

III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**





B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

IV.) WEAPON: DLT-19

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**




B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

**CHECKED & CLEARED**

**STAND BY ....

[mr_hair]

Thanks mate :-)

I have lightened it up a bit already...

Is that okay?

[DirtyBoy]

It's better....try to get a side by side image with yours and the screen shot. Look at it as you were the deployment officer with an impartial assessment.

[mr_hair]

Noted. Stand by...

[mr_hair]

Better?

[iconoclasta_88]

Looking really good bro!

I am sorry it took me so long to make my assessment... been busy with real life.

Everything looks great. I have read and studied the mods suggested by Mike and how you dealt with that.

I think you do have a great armor.

One thing I too think is that your chest pattern is too heavy. But it could be just the lighting and camera. Cause, we do know that on screen and due to lighting and camera lenses and film, weathering looks much lighter than in photographs. It could be the case. But if you aim to portray that trooper on that specific scene, just try to emulate it as close as possible. And if there is no off-set picture of that specific moment, then we will need to go by whats available.

All this to say, yes, the pattern looks right now. The dark pattern that is. But now I feel like there is too much white under it. This might sound opposed to what we have asked before... but no. You need to add a light layer of dirt texture over the central pattern on the chest. So that you can easily see two layers. The "base layer" which is the one I am asking you to add, and then the pattern. Just a light layer of brown over the whole thing to keep those flashy whites away.

I dont really know if I will be able to come back soon or not ATM. So, I will leave this to Rick's and Mike's consideration. All the rest of the armor looks worth of SWAT. Just finish this pattern and you are done.

This reminds me a bit of Jay's (Trooper1) deployment. At one point everything was perfect, but we had to come and go with the central pattern on the chest. With each new SWAT submission we are setting a higher bar since day 1. So, keep it up bro. You will soon get it and will be approved. And that is something very special among this bortherhood!

Congrats already...

Saludos

[mr_hair]

Thanks for the feedback. I shall get on that immediately :-)

[mr_hair]

[iconoclasta_88]

Nice!

Rick, Mike?

Your call.

I am ok.

Saludos.

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Juan - Roger that.

Stand by...

[SCRIBBLER]

MEPD SWAT OFFICER APPLICATION : ** APPROVED: 6/11/2014 **

James, on behalf of the MEPD Commanding Officer and Executive Officer, It is my honor to officially activate you as the first SWAT Officer of 2014!

Your hard work and your attention to detail on your build has been carefully evaluated and inspected. You have met all the requirements to place you among the MEPD's FInest.

Thank you again for your patience throughout this process, Trooper!

Please submit a pic that you would like to use for your SWAT Profile to Luis (TD-5044 / "SANDMAN TIGUI") or Ruggero (TD-66369 / "P3laton3") to help get you properly processed onto the SPECIAL WEAPONS and TACTICS Unit Members Page.


Congratulations on successfully taking the next step as a proud member of the SANDTROOPER ELITE.

Please gather your gear, charge your weapon and report to the 'Ready Room' to await further orders.


Welcome aboard, SWAT OFFICER # 028...

** Thanks again for showing extreme patience and for your commitment and cooperation through this entire process! **

~SCRIBBLER / TD-6985 / MEPD DEPLOYMENT OFFICER




Name: James Hoy
Legion ID #: TD-46800
Forum Name: Mr_Hair
Garrison: UK Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: CANTINA CAPTAIN



I.) HELMET:


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED



II.) Armor / Suit Details:


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED


B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED




III.) BACKPACK: VERSION # 3


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED


B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED


IV.) WEAPON: E-11


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED


B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED



C.) COMMANDING OFFICER:

CHECKED AND CLEARED

[boltstrooper]

James -- Congrats. Welcome on board to the swat team. Well done.

[mr_hair]

Amazing!!! Thanks chaps, I'm so chuffed. What a marvellous thing to wake up to. I feel genuinely honoured to have been given this :-)

[mr_hair]

Also want to say thanks to all the Brittania Patrol for being such a great bunch of lads. They've really made me feel part of the team since joining and I'm proud to be part of their ranks.

[Felice]

Congrats James! You did a really good work!!

Cheers

[Beren]

Welcome to the team!!! The changes you made to your weathering look great.

[mr_hair]

Cheers lads

[Gordonator]

Good job James! can you send your profile pic to Luis asap so that I can post this up at our Facebook page. First SWAT Officer of 2014 is definitely something to be proud of.

And also PM sent for some exclusive SWAT member swag.

[iconoclasta_88]

Congrats bro!

Your armor is outstanding, you deserved a spot on the team!

Saludos

[DirtyBoy]

Awesome job man!!! Congrats on your SWAT activation.

[Sandman Tigui]

Big congrats brother!!!!

[mr_hair]

A few new pics for everyone :-)