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Name: Brian Holm

Legion ID #: TD-10252

Forum Name: Bigdane

Garrison: Nordic Garrison

Trooper Emulated: Docking bay 94 V1 (garinden)

armour: ATA

build tread: http://forum.mepd.ne...owtopic=9019=

Update tread: http://forum.mepd.ne...showtopic=10889

weatering: http://forum.mepd.ne...showtopic=10958

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Member must currently be deployed as an MEPD Police Officer to be considered. - yes

Weathering must be appropriate to screen used armor. Too little or too much weathering will not be allowed. - yes

Pack, pauldron, and weapon combinations must match a specific trooper a seen on screen. - yes

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Weapon:

scratch build T21 : http://forum.mepd.ne...?showtopic=8781

screen accurat detajles: ripped barrel, 2 tone canvas slings, rear and front sight, round detale in the main stock, oil resuare on top and bottom of the stock., blue coiled wire on the front barrel.

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looking spot on brian,

is that a spot of velcro on your ab plate?

thinking about adding a bit to mine just to keep the belt straight! :thumbsup:

Yep its velcro strip to keep the belt in its place. During trooping
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VERY nice rig you have there, Brian! :yes:

Your attention to detail really shows with this build. What I'm really impressed with (using the ATA Armor) is that you have included one detail that some of the ATA owners out there have done with their armor (like we in the 66ers have also done, for example): You added the pop rivet detail on the ab section! Kudos, Brother!

This will also inspire new members to go even deeper into detail inspection of their existing gear, no matter what kit they may have. In the end, I feel that the MEPD Members will have the most uniform looking bunch of troopers in the Legion!

That is what the MEPD is all about...Pride, Community and Excellence!

Final observations from me before you continue your SWAT application process: Nice weapon and weathering!

Keep up the great work and good luck with your SWAT journey!

Try to remain patient during the duration and before you know it, you will have earned your badge of honor.

Juan, Rick...this SWAT applicant is all yours! :td::thumbsup:

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Season's Greetings, Brian!

Please don't worry about Command Staff not discussing your gear. The powers that be are well aware of your application and wanted me to let you know and offer apologies for the slight delay in the full inspection and ruling. :yes:

Things are just a wee bit hectic here in the Precinct due to the time of year as you can probably tell. I just wanted to touch bases with you to let you know that Juan will personally update you asap when he is able.

Command was unexpectedly blindsided by a few issues (personal and otherwise) and it would be a shame if your SWAT application was given a quick look without any type of creative criticism or comments in general that can help get you to where you want to be.

Our plan going into 2013 is to tighten things up here (A LOT) and get everything ready to go in the new year. The Standard OFFICER DEPLOYMENT has a solid new template in place and it appears like you will be one of the first SWAT Applicants that will be judged with the new guidelines and requirements in regards to the next level TD.

I can honestly say that you are well on your way, BIGDANE!

But, if you can be patient for a just a little while longer, we will definitely get you squared away, Troop. Good?

Hope all is well, with you and yours, Brother!

Take care and you will be among the Elite before you know it, Brian!

Merry Christmas and have a Safe and Happy New Year! :td::salute:

*PERSONAL NOTE: Your gear is awesome, Brother. The weathering and your attention to armor detail is downright mind-blowing!

And this already goes without saying, your BFG is a masterpiece that you should definitely be proud of! :yes:

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MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1)

Name: Brian Holm

Legion ID #: TD-10252

Forum Name: BIGDANE

Garrison: Nordic Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: DOCKING BAY 94 CAPTAIN (V1) "GARINDAN MEET"

I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK

b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK

c.) Number Of Teeth -- (3) Correct for Version Selected: CHECK

d.) Mic Tips -- NEED TO SEE CLOSE UP PIC FOR DETAILS (See Comments)

e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- NEED TO SEE CLOSE UP PIC FOR DETAILS (See Comments)

f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK

g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK

h.) Brow -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

The helmet looks really good, Brian! Your attention to detail is noted and is very impressive. All we need to see on this section are additonal 'close-up' pics showing the details on the mic tips and vocoder. Please submit.

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas Straps -- CHECK

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK

c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK

d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK

e.) Biceps -- CHECK

f.) Forearms -- CHECK

g.) Pauldron -- (See Comments)

h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK

I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK

j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK

m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK

n.) Boots -- CHECK

o.) Gloves -- CHECK

p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK

q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK

r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK

s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK

t.) Pouches -- (2) Small Spanish Pouches -- CHECK

u.) Weathering -- CHECK

v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK

w.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

"Impressive. Very Impressive." lol

But seriously, your armor is on point! The detailing and the organic look of your 'desert weathered' armor only adds to the realism and accuracy to your onscreen counterpart. Now with that said, we did see that your pauldron needs a slight mod. Although the Move Along Captain and The Docking Bay Captain have the 'spot'. The Docking Bay version is a little more muted and washed out. Can you tone the detail down a bit and submit another pic(s)?

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

III.) BACKPACK: NONE USED WITH THIS SELECTED TROOPER CHECK

IV.) WEAPON: T-21

a.) Details -- CHECK

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

A very fine looking weapon you have there, Brian. excellent and definitely spot on! Nothing more needs to be said about this. :td::thumbsup:

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

**MORE REVIEWS/COMMENTS COMING (X.O. and C.O.)

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Hey Brian, sorry for the delayed review but work has been insane for me over the past few weeks. I think you look great and its obvious you spent a whole lot of time adhering to the details of your selected trooper. Im sure Mike will have you cleared in no time. Good luck my friend

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MEPD SWAT OFFICER: APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2)

Name: Brian Holm

Legion ID #: TD-10252

Forum Name: BIGDANE

Garrison: Nordic Garrison

** ANH SANDTROOPER SELECTED **: DOCKING BAY 94 CAPTAIN (V1) "GARINDAN MEET"

I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK

b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK

c.) Number Of Teeth -- (3) Correct for Version Selected: CHECK

d.) Mic Tips -- NEED TO SEE MIC TIP GRILLS WEATHERED A BIT MORE (See Comments)

e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK

f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK

g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK

h.) Brow -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Thanks for submitting the requested pic of the vocoder. Great!

You are almost there, Brian! Awesome work so far and thank you for your patience during this entire process. With that said, we would still like to see the your mic tip grills weathered a bit more just so they don't look too 'clean' (i.e. stark white). Please submit pics from different angles too. :td::thumbsup:

Try to come as close as you can to this and I think you'll be ready for final evaluation, Brother! :yes:

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B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas Straps -- CHECK

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK

c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK

d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK

e.) Biceps -- CHECK

f.) Forearms -- CHECK

g.) Pauldron -- CHECK

h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK

I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK

j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK

m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK

n.) Boots -- CHECK

o.) Gloves -- CHECK

p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK

q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge -- CHECK

r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK

s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK

t.) Pouches -- (2) Small Spanish Pouches -- CHECK

u.) Weathering -- CHECK

v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK

w.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Thanks for submitting pics showing the mod to the pauldron. It looks much better in regards to the TD you selected. Excellent!

:td::thumbsup:

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER:(Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

III.) BACKPACK: NONE USED WITH THIS SELECTED TROOPER CHECK

IV.) WEAPON: T-21

a.) Details -- CHECK

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Nothing further. :td: :thumbsup:

B.) EXECUTIVE OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

C.) COMMANDING OFFICER: (Comments Pending)

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