Not to be a complete nag, but...lose the plastic straps and get some canvas ones, also lose the striping in the teardrops(a TD hasn't got those) and last but least, maybe accentuate the tube stripes a bit more, they seem to fade away in comparison to your weathering, that is looking all right to me.
You got good pointers on that already, but as TD-7304 and missingpieces mentioned..try to use different techniques to get the best result!!