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Gordonator

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    Grammer Check for SWAT Trading Cards

    in The Barracks

    Posted

    Thanks for the out/off feedback guys.

    So you guys also agree on the "Change achieved to achieve, and underwent to undergo"?

    Gordon, might I suggest you change this sentence to "Troopers who achieve this award undergo extensive research..."

    (Change achieved to achieve, and underwent to undergo)

    Grammer Check for SWAT Trading Cards

    in The Barracks

    Posted

    Hey guys,

    I am doing a trading card for our MEPD SWAT program. If you are a native speaker of english, I need your help to proof read the text below to check for any grammer mistakes.

    "The SWAT program represents the highest costuming standards for a Sandtrooper in the Mos Eisley Police Department. Troopers who achieved this award underwent extensive research to replicate the details as seen on the Sandtroopers from the movies. The end result is each SWAT Trooper looks as though they walked out/off of the big screen."

    I also need your opinion for the last sentence, "walked out of the big screen" or "walked off of the big screen"

    Which one sounds better?

    MEPD logo

    in Closed Merchandise

    Posted

    Yes I do have it but however, the 501st Legion kind of have strict rules about giving out high quality logo unless to PR Officers and Merchandise Officers for publicity and merchandises uses.

    If you have valid reasons for it, I will be more than happy to help. Just drop me a PM. :)

    deployment title

    in Off Topic Cantina

    Posted

    Marcus joined the 501st only in March 2013. And also, it's quite easy to see over at the Deployment forums, there are only 5 troopers who requested for deployment since March till now. None of it is Marcus'.

    ...what, what WHAT!

    in Off Topic Cantina

    Posted

    Wait till u see how much Mark Hamil charges. He command over USD100 for an autograph. That's cos other than the fact he's Luke Skywalker, Mark Hamil don't sign autographs over the internet or through fan mails. Only at events and he don't attend much conventions except the big ones.

    Harrison Ford charges even more cos he's the most famous among them, even till today. Even if you are willing to pay, Harrison Ford don't sign over the internet, fan mails and he don't even attend conventions. Only once in a blue moon do you get a chance to get his autograph.

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