Hello Arturo, welcome in the PO-Program of the MEPD.
Let´s start your first Review!
Name: Arturo Pichardo
Legion ID: 10678
Forum Name: Arthur P.
Garrison: Skull Garrison
Helmet
a. Green lenses: check
b. Paint color of traps / tears: check
c. Correct number of teeth: check
d. Mic tips: check
e. Vocoder color: check
f. Tube stripes: Please show me a detailed Picture of your Tubestripes! Are they Handpainted?
g. Rank bar on ears: check
h. Brow: check
i. Side screws (ears). Check
j. Weathering: check
Result on helmet:
*additional comments*
Pending
Armor details
a. Elastic straps shoulders: Please change against a elastic strap! The Snap must be sewed!
b. Neck seal: check
c. Black undersuit: check
d. Shoulder bells: check
e. Biceps: check
f. Forearms: check
g. Pauldron: check
h. Chest / back plate: check
i. Kidney / butt plate: check
j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: Your Side Rivets are not correct. Please see "Pic 1" in the Review! Please Show me a Pic of the rivets in the Backplate, Codepice and of the Screws of the AB Plate.
k. Strapping system: Please show me a Pic of your strapping system!
l. Thighs: check
m. shins / calves: check
n. sniper plate: check
o. boots: check
p. gloves: Please change your gloves against chemical Latex gloves!
q. hand plates / guards: Please change your Plates against Latex Plates!
r. ammo belt (waist): check
s. ammo belt (right knee): check
t. canvas belt: check
u. pouches: check
v. weathering: check
RESULT ON ARMOR:
*additional comments*
The gap on the side is a little big. Let´s have a look in the PO-CRL:
Armor side gaps are closed or nearly closed.
No more than 1/2 inch (12.7 mm) gap on either side.
This is done by adding a shim (or shims) of a similar type and color of material as the Abdomen and Back Armor.
Shims fit flush and may have seams, though ideally they will be seamless to the Abdomen and/or Back Armor, resulting in a single seam between the two rather than extra seams where the shims are joined.
Pending
Backpack
a. details:
- Please change your Mushroomcaps. they are really big.
- Please shorten your Mortar Tube and your lower bottle a little bit, also the detail on the mortar tube. (Look at Pic 2 in the Review)
- show me a detail pic of your radio, is it vac-fromed?
b. weathering: check
RESULT ON ARMOR:
*additional comments*
Pending
Weapon
a. details: Check
b. weathering: check
RESULT ON WEAPONS
Checked and Cleared!
Arturo, this was you’re your first review.
There are some things to changend, but it is not a lot of work! Let´s go bro!
If it helps, let´s have a look in the PO-CRL´s (blue notice for Level two)
http://databank.501st.com/databank/Costuming:TD_sandtrooper
And please, show the Pics here in the Forum, no external Links, please!
Bigwam - MEPD Deployment Officer