Name : John Reilly
Legion ID# : TD 21804
Forum name : Talizman
Garrison : UK Garrison
Trooper emulated : Cantina Captain
Currently deployed as MEPD Police Officer : Yes
Weathering appropriate to screen used armour : Yes
Pack, pauldron and weapon combination matches specific trooper seen on screen : Yes
As I´ve already mentioned, your labpipe has the wrong shape at the top. Have a look at this pic:
my very amateurish drawing should show an enlarged version of the top of the labpipe, showing the shape it should have.
Have a look at the reference pic again and try to somehow emulate that shape. Shouldn´t be too difficult as you don´t have to pull it apart again, just add something at the top.