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talizman

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  1. Hi Urs,

    Thank you for the review. I’ve changed all the points you raised on the weathering, hopefully I’m finally across the line! :salute:

    Back of right shoulder bell and biceps

    It´s easier to get the weathering right on these parts if you twist the right biceps clockwise.

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    Chest 

    1. You have successfully toned down the “Clawmarks” but there should be four of them and the one furthest on the right should be extended.

    2. You should add some dirt on the upper left chest to match the reference.

    3. This section on the righthand bottom of the chest should also receive slightly more dirt

    Abdomen 

    Please add this vertical line (as seen in m4rick’s SWAT application thread)

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    Thighs and Knee ammo belt

    1. Please add the U-shaped weathering in the section after the first raised rectangular detail:

    2. Please adjust the strangely shaped spot on the right inside thigh so it matches the screen cap.

     
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  2. 44 minutes ago, m4vrick said:

    John, these people are here to help you. This SWAT program is an ever-evolving program and it should be. As you probably know, alley check captain and cantina captain both wear the same armor.

    The reason I’m confused is because I haven’t seen anyone else posting pics of the rear of their armour when their trooper is a pack wearer. It seems silly to try and emulate screen accuracy when it isn’t ever seen on screen...

    You didn’t post pics of the rear of yours and I don’t recall any other pack wearer being asked to post pics of theirs 

  3. 15 hours ago, m4vrick said:

    Did you get the mortar tube from TT? If yes, one thing that i noticed was his was a little too long. I had to cut the length a little. & Hausi was correct on this mortar tube length part. 

     

    Now what you have is a SWAT worthy backpack John. Mine is honestly missing some small details; but after learning from yours, i will surely add these up. :)

    No I didn’t get the tube from TT. It’s a 68mm drain pipe and I bought 2.5m of it :D

  4. Okay so I’ve been working on the pack all day.... hopefully the issues have been addressed satisfactorily 

     

    I chopped the mounts off of the exhaust and moved them so that they correspond with the ribs like Strider’s pack 

     

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    Mortar tube painted matt black. 

     

    Mortar tube cap on at an angle

     

    Bottle cap on at an angle 

     

    Exhaust aligned with middle rib as requested 

     

    Lab pipe raised to correct height 

     

    Tape added to tool box 

     

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    the only job left to do from the list is to add to add an end cap to the lab pipe so I’ll work on that. 

     

    Hopefully then I can start weathering it if the rest is good? 

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