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    *DONE* TD-19311 Requesting Deployment

    in MEPD Police Officer Program

    Posted

    Hey Francisco,
    Here we go again! Thanks for taking the time and doing such swift and amazing work!
    Time for the next review round, so let´s go:
     
    Application Review: Part 2
    Name: Francisco Gabriel Molinos Sanz
    Legion ID: TD-19311
    Forum Name: Tremadoc
    Garrison: Spanish Garrison
     
    Helmet
    a. Green lenses: check
    b. Paint color of traps / tears: check
    c. Correct number of teeth: check
    d. Mic tips: check
    e. Vocoder color: check
    f. Tube stripes: check
    g. Rank bar on ears: check
    h. Brow: check
    i. Side screws (ears): check
    j. Weathering: check
     
    *additional comments*
    RESULT ON HELMET
    Checked & Cleared
     
    Armor details
     a. elastic straps shoulders: check
    b. neck seal: check
    c. black undersuit: check
    d. shoulder bells: check
    e. biceps: check
    f. forearms: check
    g. pauldron: check
    h. chest / back plate: check
    i. kidney / butt plate: check
    j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check
    k. strapping system: check
    l. thighs: check
    m. shins / calves: check
    n. sniper plate: check
    o. boots: check
    p. gloves: check
    q. hand plates / guards: check
    r. ammo belt (waist): check
    s. ammo belt (right knee): check
    t. canvas belt: check
    u. pouches: check
    v. weathering: check
     
    *additional comments*
    I think that the gap between your chest and abdomen is quite big when you lift your arms and although I do not expect you to do gymnastics when wearing your gear, I would still recommend shortening the strapping between chest and abdomen while at the same time maybe adding larger straps connecting chest and back resulting in a better fit at the front.
    RESULT ON ARMOR
    Checked & Cleared
     
    Backpack
    a. details: check
    b. weathering: check
    *additional comments*
    Nice pack, well done.
    RESULT ON BACKPACK
    Checked & Cleared
     
     
     
    Weapon
    a. details: check
    b. weathering: check
    *additional comments*
    RESULT ON WEAPONS
    Checked & Cleared
     
    Francisco, this was your second and final review! Your gear looks great and you are a worthy addition to the ranks of the MEPD´s finest and one of the largest Sandtrooper Patrols out there, our proud brothers and sisters of the Spanish Dewback Patrol.
    Be proud of yourself! I salute you mate.:salute:
    Mis felicitaciones!
    You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met all requirements.
    Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

    We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.
    Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD!
     
    Cheers mate!
     
     
    Hausi - MEPD Deployment Officer
    Hi everybody!
    Thank you all for your help and support. It is a real honor to be part of this. Very very happy.

    Thank you!!



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    *DONE* TD-19311 Requesting Deployment

    in MEPD Police Officer Program

    Posted

    9 minutes ago, Hausi said:

    Hey Francisco, you have successfully completed those requested changes, the kneeplate looks great and the gap between the abdomen and the kidney has disappeared, well done. 

    My fellow sandie Tiny has made me realise that I forgot about those two snaps in the buttplate, I am sorry but checking all the necessary details, one can sometimes miss an essential one and as our PO CRL says:

    Posterior Armor (Buttplate):

    • Visible fasteners under lower Buttpiece center includes two (or 3) male snaps in the back (snap part on the inside of the buttpiece). Fasteners need not be functional.

    So please post a picture of those snaps.

    Thanks a lot! 

    Sorry, i forgot to send it.

    I clean the Dewback Stables today.

     

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    *DONE* TD-19311 Requesting Deployment

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    Posted

    On 3/11/2019 at 7:29 PM, Hausi said:

    Hi Francisco,

    first of all: my knick name/forum name isn´t "Gausi" but "Hausi":sweat:

    As there are still some points to address, I won´t write another complete review yet but give you a little more time to get these things dealt with.

    The colour of your seedtrays and bottles looks good now and it´s really an improvement that you have painted those screws as they don´t stand out that much any longer. Your pack is good to go.

    As far as the gap between kidney and abdomen is concerned... it seems to me that you have just posted the pics from your basic approval: The screws in the lower returnedge at the bottom of the chest are suddenly missing and the chest is also sitting too high in comparison with the abdomen. Moreover this time the waist ammobelt is actually sitting a little too low, I would suggest using snaps to assure the ammobelt stays where it is supposed to be. I will have to ask you to put on your armor once again.

    Unfortunately you got me wrong about the Sniper knee plate. You have cut down the knee ammobelt which is okay but the sniper knee plate is still too thick. Have a look at the following pics in which I have encircled the knee plates:

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    You have already done a very good job with the backpack and I think the other points will be a piece of cake for you, so keep up the good work!

    I´m looking forward to seeing the new pics of your improved gear.

    Cheers mate.:salute:

     

    Hi again Hausi (G is next to H... :-)):

    So, let´s go.

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    Cheers.

     

    Fran.

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    Posted

    Hi buddy. Your belt is now in the correct position and the colour of your backpack parts is very good.
    But I think your sniperplate is still too thick.


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    Hi Sir.
    About this, an aclaration. This first photo is uncutted (see the black line). The second one is cutted.

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    Posted

    On 2/28/2019 at 2:25 PM, Hausi said:

    Hey Francisco,

    welcome again! Great to see the Spanish Garrison is getting even stronger!

    Now it´s time to start your review, so let´s go:

     

    Application Review: Part 1

    Name: Francisco Gabriel Molinos Sanz

    Legion ID: TD-19311

    Forum Name: Tremadoc

    Garrison: Spanish Garrison

     

    Helmet

    a. Green lenses: check

    b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

    c. Correct number of teeth: check

    d. Mic tips: check

    e. Vocoder color: check

    f. Tube stripes: check

    g. Rank bar on ears: check

    h. Brow: check

    i. Side screws (ears): check

    j. Weathering: check

     

    *additional comments*

    Nice job on the helmet, you really nailed the grimy look, I personally find it to be a bit too much but everyone to his liking.
    I would suggest getting rid of the mesh behind the teeth, it´s not screenaccurate for Sandtroopers.

    Those Tubestripes are immaculate, I had to look twice to check if they are really handpainted.:sweat:

    RESULT ON HELMET

    Checked & Cleared

     

    Armor details

     

    a. elastic straps shoulders: check

    b. neck seal: check

    c. black undersuit: check

    d. shoulder bells: check

    e. biceps: check

    f. forearms: check

    g. pauldron: check

    h. chest / back plate: check

    i. kidney / butt plate: see comments

    j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

    k. strapping system: check

    l. thighs: check

    m. shins / calves: check

    n. sniper plate: see comments

    o. boots: check

    p. gloves: check

    q. hand plates / guards: check

    r. ammo belt (waist): see comments

    s. ammo belt (right knee): check

    t. canvas belt: check

    u. pouches: check

    v. weathering: check

     

    *additional comments*
    I think that the gap between your biceps and forearms is a little too big as the forearms seem to be rather short but I´m going to let this pass

    The gap between kidney and abdomen is too big, as you seem to be a rather slim guy, I think it shouldn´t be a problem to close this gap by fastening the ammobelt a little more (I will need you to suit up once again for this adjustment):

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    The sniper knee plate is too thick, have a look at the screenpic and try to sand/cut it down slightly:

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    As my fellow troopers have already recommended, the ammobelt is sitting way too high, please adjust it to the proper height:

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    RESULT ON ARMOR

    pending

     

    Backpack

    a. details: see comments

    b. weathering: check

    *additional comments*

    As noticed by your fellow troopers:

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    1: the exhaustport is a little too long

    2: please paint the screws you have used to attach the exhaustport and to join the trays in a color matching these parts.

    3: the beestinger on your cantina is also slightly too long, please shorten it.

    And finally: The blue color is too light, it should rather be a bluish grey color, like battleship grey (RAL 7031), so please repaint it.

    RESULT ON BACKPACK

    pending

     

     

    Weapon

    a. details: check

    b. weathering: check

    *additional comments*

    Your E-11 looks good, it doesn´t look like the typical Doopy blaster and I like it how you have made it look aged and worn but you could get rid of the curly wire connecting the power cylinders and the counter.

    I always encourage people to take the next step and go full “Bapty” , I´m sure you know what I´m talking about.:)

    RESULT ON WEAPONS

    Checked & Cleared

     

    Francisco, this was your first review! Keep up the good work, you are very close to deployment and I think those changes are manageable.

    I´m looking forward to seeing some new pics of your improved gear soon.

    Cheers mate

     

    Hausi - MEPD Deployment Officer

    Hi again Gausi:

    Thank you very much for the comments and help.
    I extend it to all the colleagues who have encouraged me and positively suggested things to improve. The following photographs are referred to the proposed changes.

    Cheers.

    Fran.

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    Posted

    Hi Bro. Great work but there is one thing.
    Your belt is too high. You should put it upwards.
    And I think your exhaust port is a little bit long and very thin.
    But maybe it looks at the picture like this. Can you post another one of your pack which is more detailed.
    But all over a good build and I like your weathering. It is very rough and very dirty and got a very used look.
    Good luck buddy.


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    Thank you very much for you advice.

    Fran.

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    Posted

    looking good Trooper.
    As DerGummo mentioned 
    Your belt is definitely too high,  the exhaust does look a bit long and thin, also i think your bee stinger is too long, apart from these small issues it's looking good and you should be proud. Best advise i can give , is wait for your armourer to contact you and follow his advise.
    Best of luck mate.
    Thank you very muchas for you support and advice.
    Take note.

    Fran.

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