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@ Sean - Your mod updates look better! You are almost there! There are just a few more minor details that need to be taken care of, Brother! Let's continue... APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2) Name: Sean Macready Legion ID #: TD-42887 Forum Name: Smacready Garrison: Southern California Garrison I.) HELMET: a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK ** Additional Comments -- -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Perfect! You are good to go here! II.) Armor / Suit Details: a.) Canvas / Nylon Straps -- CHECK g.) Pauldron -- CHECK j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (See Comments) s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK u.) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Great looking armor and gear, Troop! A couple of tweaks and you'll be all set. You are almost there! - Ab Plate As noted, you will need to add a shim to close the gap a bit on your sides (Kidney Plate). Not to the point of closure or even hairline thin. Just enough to lessen the space. We understand that body shapes are all different here. We are just trying to get everybody as close to uniform in appearance as we can! Outstanding work so far! - Correct Upper Right AB snap You'll have to swap yours out for the more accurate piece. The placement is spot on though! PER CRL -- One snap on the top right hand side of the Abdomen Armor: -- Back of male side of snap shows on outside of Abdomen Armor.

Hello, Andy! Thanks for your interest in joining our ranks! Before we can continue, we'll need to see your uploaded armor and gear in the standard picture submissions format. If you are not familiar with them, please reference the examples from past members in this section! Also, you'll need to enter and post your member info so that all members viewing this thread can see. Standard procedure. Name: XXX 501st ID: XXX MEPD Forum Name: XXX Garrison: XXX Many thanks, Troop! We look forward to officially adding you to the roster soon!

@ Sean - Thank you for your interest in joining the proud officers of the MEPD, Brother! Let's begin... APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1) Name: Sean Macready Legion ID #: TD-42887 Forum Name: Smacready Garrison: Southern California Garrison I.) HELMET: a.) Green Lenses -- (See Comments) b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK h.) Brow -- CHECK i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK ** Additional Comments -- -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Just need to confirm that you have green lenses in your bucket! The ol' flashlight in the helmet trick is the usual go-to move here. Other than that, your lid looks aces! II.) Armor / Suit Details: a.) Canvas / Nylon Straps -- (See Comments) b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK e.) Biceps -- CHECK f.) Forearms -- CHECK g.) Pauldron -- CHECK h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (See Comments) k.) Thighs -- CHECK l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK n.) Boots -- CHECK o.) Gloves -- CHECK p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK s.) Canvas Belt -- (See Comments) t.) Pouches -- CHECK u.) Weathering -- (See Comments) v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Great looking armor and gear, Troop! You are almost there! I was going to note that your 'dirty details' might need some work (muting on some of the heavier weathered sections) but the dark accents look lighter in the outside pictures. So you might be ok. I would recommend that you experiment with adding a little light ochre / cream washes / accents to some of the darker areas to mimic the 'Tatooine Sand' look. What I do need is to see mods and updated pics of the following (Per CRL: SANDTROOPER): - Canvas/ Nylon Shoulder Straps - Correct Upper Right AB snap - Side Rivets (Left Side) 6 total - Canvas Belt appears a bit 'clean'. Could be the lighting, but you may need to dirty it up a bit more. Once those requests check out we can move onto the final phase of your deployment process! III.) BACKPACK: a.) Details -- CHECK b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Excellent looking pack and all details meet the requirements! IV.) WEAPON(S): T-21 a.) Details -- CHECK b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Outstanding T-21! The true BFG!

@ Steve - Spike the Blue Milk, Brother! APPLICATION REVIEW (FINAL) Name: Al Michie Legion ID #: TD-90409 Forum Name: jedicheeseboy Garrison: UK Garrison ** FINAL COMMENTS FROM DEPLOYMENT OFFICER** Excellent work, Al! You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department! You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements. Now, you can march with the rest of the 'Dirty Bunch' down the halls of the Precinct.. Your locker has been assigned and you are now ready to be placed on the roster among most elite troopers in the Outer Rim Territories. Your Profile link will be updated shortly. All I ask of you now is to confirm the Call Sign that you want use. Also, please send the pic you want to use to either Luis (Sandman Tigui) or John (Henselmonster) and we'll get you squared away. Good? Here is your MEPD Profile Link: jedicheeseboy Congratulations on achieving this respected status in the 501st Legion! -- "SCRIBBLER" -- TD-6985 / MEPD SPECIALIST / AMBASSADOR

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HI, Al! Looks like you have the correct snap in that package! Match it up with the ref pic and let's get you squared away, Brother!

@ Al - Thank you for your interest in joining the proud officers of the MEPD, Troop! Let's begin... APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1) Name: Al Michie Legion ID #: TD-90409 Forum Name: jedicheeseboy Garrison: UK Garrison I.) HELMET: a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK h.) Brow -- CHECK i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK ** Additional Comments -- -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Awesome looking bucket! II.) Armor / Suit Details: a.) Canvas / Nylon Straps -- CHECK b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK e.) Biceps -- CHECK f.) Forearms -- CHECK g.) Pauldron -- CHECK h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (See Comments) k.) Thighs -- CHECK l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK n.) Boots -- CHECK o.) Gloves -- CHECK p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK t.) Pouches -- CHECK u.) Weathering -- CHECK v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Outstanding armor build, Brother! Everything checks out nicely! I just need to see a closeup of your AB RIVET detail. The picture you posted has the detail, but we need to have it appear more like the pic below yours. Just take care of that mod if you haven't already and we can wrap up your application! VERY nice overall construction! ** /\ /\ PER CRL -- One snap on the top right hand side of the Abdomen Armor: -- Back of male side of snap shows on outside of Abdomen Armor. III.) BACKPACK: a.) Details -- CHECK b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Your pack and detail requirements check out fine, My Friend! Very nice! IV.) WEAPON(S): T-21 a.) Details -- CHECK b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Excellent looking E-11!

@ Al - Nice looking rig, Troop! Your official review will begin within the next 24 hours! Stand by...

List Updated: 172 Officers have now received their requested Certificates.

@ Steve - You are all set, Trooper! APPLICATION REVIEW (FINAL) Name: Steve R Alder-Goad Legion ID #: TD-18969 Forum Name: Stevieboy Garrison: Terror Australis ** FINAL COMMENTS FROM DEPLOYMENT OFFICER** Excellent work, Steve! You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department! You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements. Now, you can march with the rest of the 'Dirty Bunch' down the halls of the Precinct.. Your locker has been assigned and you are now ready to be placed on the roster among most elite troopers in the Outer Rim Territories. Your Profile link will be updated shortly. All I ask of you now is to confirm the Call Sign that you want use. Also, please send the pic you want to use to either Luis (Sandman Tigui) or John (Henselmonster) and we'll get you squared away. Good? Here is your MEPD Profile Link: Stevieboy Congratulations on achieving this respected status in the 501st Legion! -- "SCRIBBLER" -- TD-6985 / MEPD SPECIALIST / AMBASSADOR

One more look with your modified gear on and let's get you squared away, Trooper!

MUCH better! Stand by...

@ Steve - Excellent progress, Mate! Echoing my fellow Command Staffers, we just want to make sure you are on the right path and that your rig is the best that it could and WILL be! You are definitely almost there! Let's continue... APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2) Name: Steve R Alder-Goad Legion ID #: TD-18969 Forum Name: Stevieboy Garrison: Terror Australis II.) Armor / Suit Details: a.) Canvas / Nylon Straps -- CHECK b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK e.) Biceps -- CHECK f.) Forearms -- CHECK g.) Pauldron -- CHECK h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK k.) Thighs -- CHECK l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK n.) Boots -- CHECK o.) Gloves -- CHECK p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK t.) Pouches -- CHECK u.) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS) v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Everything looks great, Brother! The weathering is the only thing you need to take care of. A very frustrating process indeed, but well worth it in the end. No worries, we have a spot reserved for you in the Precinct. Just take your time, heed the advice of your fellow TDs and get this part as close to spot on as possible. We'll be here waiting! You are definitely going to be another fine addition to our ranks!

@ Steve - you are good to go on your pauldron!

That could be one of the black pauldrons flipped over, meaning a more SWAT like detail. But, it just may be enough to clear the standard P.O. requirements. Confirmation shortly.

@ Steve - This detail actually... As for the other mod requests, looking forward to seeing your changes. I will also get a definite answer for you in regards to your Pauldron. Even though this isn't a SWAT Review, we still want to keep all deployed officers as close to accurate as possible. The extra work and attention to detail is definitely worth it. SWAT status is just the cherry on top of any committed MEPD TD's build. You are close, Brother! We'll see you on the Roster soon for sure!

@ Steve - Thanks for your interest in joining the ranks of the MEPD, Mate! Let's begin... APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1) Name: Steve R Alder-Goad Legion ID #: TD-18969 Forum Name: Stevieboy Garrison: Terror Australis I.) HELMET: a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK h.) Brow -- CHECK i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK j.) Weathering: (SEE COMMENTS) ** Additional Comments -- -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Outstanding construction! Great work! The weathering is the only thing I would say to tweak a bit. The patterns are fine, but the overall tone looks more 'dirt-like' as opposed to sand. Can you test out a section of the bucket with a mix of more sand like color? A few dabs here and there. That is probably all it really needs to achieve the 'look'. II.) Armor / Suit Details: a.) Canvas / Nylon Straps -- CHECK b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK e.) Biceps -- CHECK f.) Forearms -- CHECK g.) Pauldron -- (SEE COMMENTS) h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS) k.) Thighs -- CHECK l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK n.) Boots -- CHECK o.) Gloves -- CHECK p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK t.) Pouches -- CHECK u.) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS) v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Great looking rig, Brother! Can you post a closeup of your upper ight AB SNAP detail? Your white pauldron may not be acceptable though. Stand by on confirmation. Your White One... The flat smooth look is acceptable for the Orange and Black pauldrons, but I do believe the White Pauldron should have this appearance in regards to the groove details... Also, as mentioned in the Bucket Section, a few tweaks on your present armor weathering colors and you'll be good to go here, Brother! Our goal is to make sure each and every member is close to accurate as possible while still maintaining each armor's unique appearance and personality. It also will save you hassle / time and eliminate the frustrating review roadblocks if you decide to take on the SWAT program later. III.) BACKPACK: a.) Details -- CHECK b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: You are all set here, Troop! IV.) WEAPON(S): T-21 a.) Details -- CHECK b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Your DLT is good to go. Very nice!!

List Updated: 171 Officers have now received their requested Certificates.

List Updated: 170 Officers have now received their requested Certificates.

Your request has been accepted and your official review will begin within the next 24 hours. Stand by...

List Updated: 169 Officers have now received their requested Certificates.

@ Timothy - Request received, Troop! Stand by...

@ Sascha - Stand tall, Trooper! APPLICATION REVIEW (FINAL) Name: Sascha Gündel Legion ID #: TD-31816 Forum Name: Sascha9481G Garrison: German Garrison ** FINAL COMMENTS FROM DEPLOYMENT OFFICER** Excellent work, Sascha! You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department! You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements. Now, you can march with the rest of the 'Dirty Bunch' down the halls of the Precinct.. Your locker has been assigned and you are now ready to be placed on the roster among most elite troopers in the Outer Rim Territories. Your Profile link will be updated shortly. All I ask of you now is to confirm the Call Sign that you want use. Also, please send the pic you want to use to either Luis (Sandman Tigui) or John (Henselmonster) and we'll get you squared away. Good? Here is your MEPD Profile Link: Sascha9481G Congratulations on achieving this respected status in the 501st Legion! -- "SCRIBBLER" -- TD-6985 / MEPD SPECIALIST / AMBASSADOR

@ Sascha - You are just about there, my friend! Let's finish up... APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2) Name: Sascha Legion ID #: TD-31816 Forum Name: Sascha9481G Garrison: German Garrison -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Again, fine looking rig there, Troop! You need to take care of one minor detail and you'll be all set! Your present snap detail on your upper right shown here... ...needs to look like this... PER CRL -- One snap on the top right hand side of the Abdomen Armor: Back of male side of snap shows on outside of Abdomen Armor. We just want to make sure you are on the right path from the start in terms of 'close to accurate' and if you decide to take on the SWAT Program later. You are nearly done, Brother! Take care of that and we can add you the Roster!

@ Sascha - Danke for your interest in joining the ranks of the MEPD, Brother! First off, I apologize for getting to your application a bit delayed. Let's begin... APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1) Name: Sascha Gündel Legion ID #: TD-31816 Forum Name: Sascha9481G Garrison: German Garrison I.) HELMET: a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK h.) Brow -- CHECK i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK ** Additional Comments -- -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Excellent overall construction! Good job! II.) Armor / Suit Details: a.) Canvas / Nylon Straps -- CHECK b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK e.) Biceps -- CHECK f.) Forearms -- CHECK g.) Pauldron -- CHECK h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (See Comments) k.) Thighs -- CHECK l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK m.) Sniper Plate -- CHECK n.) Boots -- CHECK o.) Gloves -- CHECK p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK t.) Pouches -- CHECK u.) Weathering -- (See Comments) v.) Crotch Snaps -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Your armor looks great, Troop! Can you post a closeup of your AB RIVET detail? I just wanted to check something. Also, a few tweaks on the weathering and you'll be aces here, Brother! Mute / tone the mouth area weathering a bit so it doesn't look too 'leaking from the mouth' as opposed to a more realistic sand/grit dropoff. A minor mod, but easily doable. Nice work overall! III.) BACKPACK: a.) Details -- CHECK (See Comments) b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Nice looking pack, My Friend! Please keep in mind if you decide to pursue SWAT Status later, you will need to get even closer to the appearance and parts details of the authentic ANH packs. Great work with what you have represented right now, rest assured. For standard Deployment, you are spot on. For SWAT, you'll need to focus on and study the details on the Syphon, upper right exhaust assembly and placement, the missing radar disc mount and the upper left tool box and the canteen / bee stinger assembly. Again, not to worry too much. You are on the right track! IV.) WEAPON(S): T-21 a.) Details -- CHECK b..) Weathering -- CHECK -- DEPLOYMENT OFFICER NOTES:: Fine looking BFG you have there and it meets standard requirements!