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Jochen Till 

TD-30087

https://www.501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=21932

Forum name: jochensen

German Garrison

 

 

"Helmet Off" / Mugshot:

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Full Armor & Helmet Front:

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Full Armor & Helmet Right:

Pouches, minimal/closed gap

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Full Armor & Helmet Left:

Pouches, minimal/closed gap

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Full Armor & Helmet Back:

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Full Armor & Helmet Back w/o Backpack:

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Sniper knee:

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Elastic shoulder straps detail:

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Canvas belt with pouches:

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Abs details close up:

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Rubber gloves and latex handguards:

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Pauldron & shoulder pouch:

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Snaps, screws and buttons on the armor:

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Helmet:

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Flat green lenses / grey frown / cut out teeth / no mesh / mic tips:

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Detail photo showing no stripes on all grey traps and tears:

[Link tbc] 

Detail photos of blue tube stripes:

[Link tbc]  

 

Backpack:

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E-11 (ANH):

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Full body action shot:

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This is one tidy application, kudos for putting so much effort into it, should be seen as a prime example for all future applicants. 

Love the weathering. :duim:

One wee bit of criticism : I always encourage people to go full Tunisian Bapty E-11. But at least there's still room for improvement in the future. ;)

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Hello Jochen, I am pleased to see that you have submitted your Level 2 application. Your pictures are excellent. Big enough to see all the details. Let's see what we notice on it and whether it meets the requirements. Let us begin:

 

Application Review: Part 1

Name: Joche Till

Legion ID: TD-30087

Forum Name: jochensen

Garrison: German Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check: check

k. no mesh behind teeth: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / codpiece: see comments

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check (The belt could go down a bit. But you can also see pictures where it is worn like this. A matter of taste.)

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check: check - I love the weathering, great work

 

RESULT ON ARMOR

Pending

A little thing that can be fixed quickly: Cut off the ends of the board at a slight angle. In the original they were too. It doesn't have to be as extreme as the original armor picture shows. (The disadvantage of such large pictures, you can see more details)

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Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

RESULT ON BACKPACK

checked & cleared

 

 

 Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON WEAPON

Checked & Cleared

(As Urs says, you could swap your E-11 for the Bapty version, that would complete the overall picture.)

 

Jochen, great work, one little thing to do. Some minutes to work and nothing stands in the way of the PO. You don't have to put on the full armor, a picture of the button plate will do. :

 Best Regards, bigwam.

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Wow, this was fast, so let´s do the second review.

 

Application Review: Part 2

Name: Joche Till

Legion ID: TD-30087

Forum Name: jochensen

Garrison: German Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check: check

k. no mesh behind teeth: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / codpiece: check

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check: check

 

RESULT ON Armor

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

RESULT ON BACKPACK

checked & cleared

 

 

 Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON WEAPON

Checked & Cleared

 

This was the second and last Review. Jochen, Congratulations - Your armor has reached level 2 and you can now proudly wear the title "Police Officer".

You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements, be proud of yourself. Now, you are a member of the Police Officers, the Elite Troopers of Tatooine!

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared.

 

Bigwam - MEPD Deployment Officer

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8 hours ago, bigwam said:

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared. 

Thank you @bigwam and @hausi – and to all newbies: hurry up, please! :D

 

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