*DONE*TD-8903 Requesting Deployment

[td8903]

noah gross

td8903 http://www.501st.com/members/displaymember.php?userID=1691&costumeID=2

TD8903

florida garrison/ everglades squad

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Noah - Thanks for your submitting your application requesting MEPD Officer Status. I will start your official review when I get back this weekend. Your armor and gear looks great so far!

Stand by...

[Gordonator]

Good luck.

[Sandman Tigui]

Looking good already Noah, to add a bit more of greatness I'd suggest to uneven or make more a dirt pattern the parts that look like a paint brush as in the biceps.

Maybe it's the picture flash but a bit more weathering to the hand guards wouldn't hurt also. Lol. My 5 cents of armor advice 😉

[td8903]

Looking good already Noah, to add a bit more of greatness I'd suggest to uneven or make more a dirt pattern the parts that look like a paint brush as in the biceps.

Maybe it's the picture flash but a bit more weathering to the hand guards wouldn't hurt also. Lol. My 5 cents of armor advice

thanks for the input. I never even noticed that it looked like that on the bicep. will dirty the hand guards better tomorrow

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Noah - Welcome and thanks for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer!

Let's begin...



APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1)

Name: Noah Gross
Legion ID #: TD-8903
Forum Name: td8903
Garrison: Florida Garrison


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Excellent work on your bucket!



** CHECKED & CLEARED **



II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- CHECK (SEE COMMENTS)
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK --CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards --CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK (SEE COMMENTS)
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK (SEE COMMENTS)




** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Your shoulder straps and Canvas Belt need to be weathered just a little bit more. Also, your Hand Plates can use a couple more hits.

All in all, great work on your armor! Take care of those minor touch ups and you'll be set, Troop!

** PENDING **



III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Nice pack!

Great job!


** CHECKED & CLEARED **



IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11, DLT-19

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Outstanding looking weapons!


** CHECKED & CLEARED **

STAND BY...

[td8903]

will get this done ASAP

thank you

[td8903]

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Noah - The shoulder straps and canvas belt can use just a bit more weathering (to almost a light tan) but I think that you should be fine for standard MEPD.

Stand by...

[td8903]

will redo it this afternoon. and post before 5 pm

thanks

[SCRIBBLER]

[td8903]

[SCRIBBLER]

@ Noah - You can now get out there an officially represent!

On behalf of the MEPD Command Staff, I'd like to officially welcome you to the Precinct! Excellent job, Trooper!


Here are your results:




APPLICATION REVIEW (Final)

Name: Noah Gross
Legion ID: TD-8903
Forum Name: td8903
Garrison: Florida Garrison


I.) HELMET:

CHECKED & APPROVED

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

CHECKED & APPROVED


III.) BACKPACK:

CHECKED & APPROVED


IV.) WEAPON:

CHECKED & APPROVED



** FINAL COMMENTS FROM THE DEPLOYMENT OFFICER**

Great work, Noah! You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department!


You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.

Now, you can march with the rest of the 'Dirty Bunch' down the halls of the Precinct.. Your locker has been assigned and you are now ready to be placed on the roster among most elite troopers in the Outer Rim Territories.

Your Profile link will be updated shortly.

All I ask of you now is to confirm the Call Sign that you want use.

Also, please send the pic you want to use to either Luis (Sandman Tigui) or Ruggero (P3laton3) and we'll get you squared away. Good?

Once we catch those responsible for tipping over three Sandcrawlers last week , we will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system.

Here is your MEPD Profile Link: td8903
Congratulations on being the EIGHTH Deployed Officer of 2014! Now please report to the Lars Residence to assist with a dometsic disturbance and await further orders, Boot!


-- "SCRIBBLER" / TD-6985 / MEPD DEPLOYMENT OFFICER

[td8903]

thank you

[SCRIBBLER]