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TD-19743 Requesting Deployment

Hollywood

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DKK Hollywood

Southern Cross Garrison, Hunter Hornets Squad

 

-One helmet off photo: Submitted separately to mod for privacy reasons. (I'm shy).

-One full armour, helmet on, front photo. Show in one picture the whole look of your armour and gear. Also show Sniper Knee Plate clearly enough:

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-One full armour, helmet on, right side photo. Showing the pouches mounted on sides if you have them and the gap closed

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-One full armor, helmet on, left side photo. Showing the pouches mounted on sides if you have them and the gap closed:

 

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-One full armor, helmet on, back photo.

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-One full armor, helmet on, back photo without backpack.

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-Canvas or elastic shoulder straps detail photo.

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-Canvas belt detail photo with pouches.

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-Abs details close up photo. Showing the 3 buttons an TD abdominal plate.

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-Detail photos of the rubber gloves and latex handguards

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- Detail photos of all snaps, screws and buttons on the armor

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Bucket (pictures can show details individually or in groups):

-A close up photo clearly showing the flat green lenses.

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-Detail photo showing no stripes on all grey traps and tears.

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-Detail photo of frown, showing 4 teeth cut out and grey paint.

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Backpack:

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The lighting make its look waaaaaaay brighter than it actually is.

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Weapons:

-DLT-19 (Currently working on Tunisian Bapty Stock)

 

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Finally:

-One (or several) full body action (or attitude poses) good quality picture.

 

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Hi Dean,

First, welcome to the MEPD and thank you for your interest in joining the MEPD´s finest.
I received your "bucket off" picture and will respect your privacy.

So, let´s start the review.

 

Application Review: Part 1

Name: "Hollywood!

Legion ID: TD-19743

Forum Name:  DKK Hollywood

Garrison: Southern Cross Garrison, Hunter Hornets Squad

 

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

k. no mesh behind teeth: check

 

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt:  see the comments

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*
The way I see it, you're a tall boy, which sometimes makes it a bit difficult with the standard armor. Maybe you can lower your lower legs a bit.

Regarding the belt: you should put it up a bit, up to the edge of the square or slightly above it (comparison picture).

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RESULT ON ARMOR

pending

 

 

Backpack

a. details: see comments

b. weathering: check

*additional comments*

I like the pack and it's well built. Only the red stripes should get some black color. Not completely, just spray over them with black so that they are not so "red" (comparison picture)  I know the red sucks and it's hard to weather and photograph sometimes. But try to make something dirtier. Tip: take a picture immediately after spraying ;)

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RESULT ON BACKPACK

pending

 

 

Weapon: DLT-19

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

Result on Weapon:

Checked & Cleared

 

Hollywood, this was your first review!

your armor looks good and the two little things are done in no time at all. I am eagerly awaiting new pictures and then nothing will stand in the way of the new police officer.

 

Regards, bigwam!

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Hello Dean, wow, this is fast ....

So let´s start the second review:

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

k. no mesh behind teeth: check

 

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt:  check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

RESULT ON ARMOR

check and cleared

 

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON BACKPACK

check an cleared

 

 

Weapon: DLT-19

 

RESULT ON WEAPON

check and cleared

 

 

This was the second and last Review. Dean, Congratulations - Your armor has reached level 2 and you can now proudly wear the title "Police Officer".

You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements, be proud of yourself. Now, you are a member of the Police Officers, the Elite Troopers of Tatooine!

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared.

 

Bigwam - MEPD Deployment Officer

 

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