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Name:  Joe Connolley

TKID:  92576

Forum Name:  Omaha Joe

Garrison:  Central Garrison (Imperial 80th Squad)

501st:  https://www.501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=32945

 

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The images were compiled into collages in an attempt to avoid this request being too pic heavy.  Each full-sized individual photo is available for submission if necessary.  Thank you for your time and consideration!!

 

Joe “Omaha Joe” Connolley

TD-92576

 

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Joe, let´s start your review.

So, welcome, to become a Police Officer in the MEPD. I have looked at your pics and now, we can start your Review:

 

Application Review: Part 1

Name: Joe Connolley

Legion ID: 92576

Forum Name: Omaha Joe

Garrison: Central Garrison (Imperial 80th Squad)

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check: check

k. no mesh behind teeth: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): See comments

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: See comments

v. weathering: check: check

 

RESULT ON ARMOR

on pending

Comments:

-Pouch: please color the seams of the upper pouch black

- Knee ammo belt: the shape of the amo belt is not correct. The end should be rounded, not cut off at a 45 ° angle. Please correct that.

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Backpack

a. details: check but read comments

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Checked & Cleared

Comments: The requirements say: right bend of frame. In that case the shape of the frame does exist, only for a different pack, so I have to accept it. In order to look as true to the film as possible, you can swap the frame for a more suitable one. Otherwise good job on the pack!

 

 Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON WEAPON

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Joe, you built a great trooper. The overall picture is right and is absolutely suitable for an elite trooper in action. Please correct the two little things and nothing stands in the way of your upgrading to Level 2.

Best Regards, bigwam.

 

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Good morning, Gentlemen..!  Thank you both so much!!  And thank you Thomas for your review of my Deployment Request!!

I’ve made the requested corrections to both the knee armor as well as blackening the seam threads of the shoulder pouch :duim:

Please let me know if any further modifications to those need to be addressed and I’ll take care of it as soon as I can...  Thank you again!!

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Hey guys..!  Thank you for your patience, got to work right away adding back some missing ABS and I think I got the right shape with the knee ammo belt this time...  Fingers crossed, but let me know if this works..?  Thank you again :thumbsup:

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Ok Joe, start in Round 2

 

Application Review: Part 2

Name: Joe Connolley

Legion ID: 92576

Forum Name: Omaha Joe

Garrison: Central Garrison (Imperial 80th Squad)

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check: check

k. no mesh behind teeth: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check (comments)

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check: check

 

RESULT ON ARMOR

Checked & Cleared

The rounding at the knee ammobelt is ok now. Acceptable. You could have taken a little more time to make it look better, but it's OK.

 

Backpack

a. details: check but read comments

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Checked & Cleared

 

 

 Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON WEAPON

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Joe, this was you’re  second and final review, great work, congrats brother!

 You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements, be proud of yourself. Now, you are a member of the Police Officers, the Elite Troopers of Tatooine!

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared.

 

Best Regards, bigwam.

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Thank you very much, Gentlemen..!  And Thomas thank you again for the review!!  Definitely noting the suggestions on the knee armor, as well as the pack frame!!

Such a proud moment to be initiated among the best of Mos Eisley’s Police Department!!  Thank you!! :td::dancing-trooper:

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