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*DONE* TD-79008 Requesting Deployment

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Hey David,

welcome and thank you for your interest in becoming an MEPD deployed officer!

Let´s get your review started:

 

Application Review: Part 1

Name: David Favela

Legion ID: TD 79008

Forum Name: MrFlavaFlave

Garrison: Star Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: see comments

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

Please add a pic showing the green lenses. I am sure you have them but I have to see a picture nevertheless. Nice helmet and I like the fact that you´ve kept it screen-accurate without adding the mesh behind the teeth.:duim:

RESULT ON HELMET

pending

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: see comments

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: see comments

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: see comments

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: see comments

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: see comments

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

 

I will need some close-up / detail pics of the following things:

-the six rivets on the left side of ab and back piece

-the back of the male snap on the right side of your ab piece

-a pic showing that the handguards are made of rubber or latex (just bend or squeeze them)

Your left biceps has slipped down and is almost sitting over the shoulder bells, please correct that, I would recommend adding an elastic strap connecting the bell and the biceps, this will keep it put and from twisting.

Your thighs are sitting too low, revealing too much black of the undersuit, please shorten the elastic straps to position them a little higher. Another advantage of doing this is giving you more freedom of movement in the knees.

The canvas MP40 pouch on your belt is wrong, please change it for one of the following pouches made of leather, furthermore it shouldn´t be positioned at such an angle.

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RESULT ON ARMOR

pending

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

*additional comments*

That is one nice and detailed pack! The exhaustport looks a little strange to me but hard to tell if it had such a curve in the movie or if it was rather straight as on most packs on here.

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Checked & Cleared

 

Weapon

a. details: see comments

b. weathering: see comments

*additional comments*

Both your guns need some dirt or a more worn and used look, they still look factory-fresh.

You just need one weapon, should you decide to go with the E-11, I would recommend getting rid of the curly wire going from the Hengstler to the powercylinders (this is just a suggestion though)

If you decide to make the DLT your weapon of choice, you´ll have to add the wire holding the T-tracks  on the front part too (seems to be missing there) and I will also have to see a picture of the left side of the pistol grip where a small disc greebly should be found.

RESULT ON WEAPON

pending

 

David, this was your first review! Please add the new pictures and put on your armor once more. Keep up the good work, those changes shouldn´t be too difficult for you.

I´m looking forward to seeing some new pics of your improved gear soon.

Cheers mate

 

Hausi - MEPD Deployment Officer

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Looks very promising already, good luck with your deployment! :duim:

 

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On 8/27/2018 at 8:05 AM, errantventurer said:

Looks awesome. Is that a handbuilt pack?

I had RS props make the kit and then I went in and did some handy work with it.

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20 hours ago, Markus ' tiny ' Zeitvogel said:

Pretty cool paintjob on the helmet :)

Thanks bud!

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2 hours ago, dutchy said:

Looks very promising already, good luck with your deployment! :duim:

 

Thank you so much. I have ordered the MP40 from trooperbay and I weathered the E-11 and the DLT. I will get the remainder of the items taken care of soon.

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On 8/30/2018 at 9:47 AM, errantventurer said:

Is that canvas pouch what RS provided for you?

Yes it is!

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All new photos on the requested updates and I have decided to use the E-11 as the blaster of choice. I adjusted the thigh armor and the biceps per your suggestions deployment officer Hausi. 

This trooper is ready to make some arrest and awaits your command! :td:

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Please shorten the straps of the backpack:

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Nice work David:duim:

But I have to agree with my fellow deployment officer bigwam, please shorten the backpack straps,that's an easy one! ;) Just show me a pic of the pack with the shortened strap, no need to suit up again. 

Please also add a pic of your new leather pouch with some weathering added (way too clean) , easiest to give it a wash with some watered down brown/earth colour and dabbing most of it off again with paper towels, repeat until you are pleased with the amount of dirt. 

I also suggest doing the same with the shoulder pouch. 

 

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3 hours ago, Hausi said:

Nice work David:duim:

But I have to agree with my fellow deployment officer bigwam, please shorten the backpack straps,that's an easy one! ;) Just show me a pic of the pack with the shortened strap, no need to suit up again. 

Please also add a pic of your new leather pouch with some weathering added (way too clean) , easiest to give it a wash with some watered down brown/earth colour and dabbing most of it off again with paper towels, repeat until you are pleased with the amount of dirt. 

I also suggest doing the same with the shoulder pouch. 

 

I will get these items done today and thanks again!

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I am sorry but I tried and tried to get the backpack photo to show vertically and I could not get it to work.

I tried all sorts of things and I hope this works.

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The pouch looks good:duim:

But the strap is still too long, isn´t it possible to cut it here?:

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Sorry, I was not sure what was meant by shortening the strap. I will get it cut today and upload a new picture.

I am sorry to be a pain in this process...

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It's great to see that people are interested in reaching an even higher level in accuracy and we are here to help you and get you deployed so don't worry at all David. 

I'm sorry if it wasn't completely clear before but now it's looking good. :duim:

Please show me a pic of the left side too and then we are good to go for the next review.

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18 minutes ago, Hausi said:

It's great to see that people are interested in reaching an even higher level in accuracy and we are here to help you and get you deployed so don't worry at all David. 

I'm sorry if it wasn't completely clear before but now it's looking good. :duim:

Please show me a pic of the left side too and then we are good to go for the next review.

Thanks again I am glad to be a part of this group and I want to achieve deployed status, so thank you for the assist!

 

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Hi David,

time to start the next round of review:

 

Application Review: Part 2

Name: David Favela

Legion ID: TD 79008

Forum Name: MrFlavaFlave

Garrison: Star Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

Armor details

 

a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

Your armor suits you well and I really like your weathering, great job!

RESULT ON ARMOR

Checked & Cleared

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Checked & Cleared

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

*additional comments*

Your E-11 is cleared now, although I would still highly recommend getting rid of those wires connecting the Hengstler counter and the powercylinders, or even encourage you to build yourself a Tunisian Bapty variant of the E-11, that would be even more accurate.:)

Don´t forget to add those wires around the T-tracks on your DLT.

RESULT ON WEAPON

Checked & Cleared

 

David, this was your second review, thank you for your patience and your willingness to deliver all those pics I asked for, even if it was a struggle to get them to show vertically ;) …and it was worth it, I think your gear looks even better now than it already did before, congrats mate, well-deserved!

 

You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements, be proud of yourself.

 

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system immediately.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD!

Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared.

Cheers mate!

 

Hausi - MEPD Deployment Officer

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Thank you so much and I am honored to be a part of the Deployed Officer Corps! :dancing-trooper:

I will remove the wires from the E-11 and I have added the T-tracks of the DLT-19.  Thanks again for the guidance and I appreciate the insight.

Time to make some arrest! :td:

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Congrats and well done! Your shinny gold coin will be on its way end of the week B)

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