Volksjager Posted July 9, 2018 Share Posted July 9, 2018 Jason Brash TD-86557 https://www.501st.com/members/displaymember.php?userID=24574&costumeID=2 Volksjager Desert Scorpion Garrison Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airborne Trooper Posted July 9, 2018 Share Posted July 9, 2018 Looking good! I love your weathering. Only thing that kinda stood out to me is the bottles on the pack. They seem a bit narrow and long IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwam Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 Ok Jason. Let´s start your review: Name: Jason Brash Legion ID: 86557 Forum Name: Volksjager Garrison: Desert Scorpion Garrison Helmet a. Green lenses: check b. Paint color of traps / tears: check c. Correct number of teeth: check d. Mic tips: check e. Vocoder color: check f. Tube stripes: check g. Rank bar on ears: check h. Brow: check i. Side screws (ears). Check j. Weathering: check Result on helmet: Checked and Cleared! Armor details a. Elastic straps shoulders: check b. Neck seal: check c. Black undersuit: check d. Shoulder bells: check e. Biceps: check f. Forearms: check g. Pauldron: check h. Chest / back plate: check i. Kidney / butt plate: check j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check k. Strapping system: check l. Thighs: check m. shins / calves: check n. sniper plate: check o. boots: check p. gloves: check q. hand plates / guards: check r. ammo belt (waist): check s. ammo belt (right knee): check t. canvas belt: check u. pouches: check v. weathering: check (i like your weathering!) RESULT ON ARMOR Checked and Cleared! Weapon a. details: Check b. weathering: check RESULT ON WEAPONS Checked and Cleared! Backpack a. details: read comments b. weathering: check RESULT ON BACKPACK pending There are two things on the Backpack, we have to talk about: First, like Jason said, the bottles are to long. Look, they are shorter and thicker. And the second: i miss the disc behind the radar dish: Your Packbuilt is great. But these are two little things, which you should still change for your po-pack. Not many work, but a clear improvement. We will see you soon for your second review! Thanks, bigwam. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwam Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 Hmmmm, i studied some Film pics and i´m not sure, if there is a disc behind the radars dish. I almost want to say: no. So, no disc is ok - but change the bottles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volksjager Posted July 10, 2018 Author Share Posted July 10, 2018 Thanks for the speedy review! I will make the changes and be back ASAP. I am glad you mentioned the no disc look as I though I had read that somewhere so I will remove my backing plate and will change the bottles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volksjager Posted July 14, 2018 Author Share Posted July 14, 2018 The radar dish is done Just working on the bottles now, will post overall pics of the pack once complete Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volksjager Posted July 15, 2018 Author Share Posted July 15, 2018 Bottles are done, now shorter and thicker than before. Both requested item’s have now been rectified. Please let me know if there is anything else you would like me to change. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwam Posted July 15, 2018 Share Posted July 15, 2018 Good morning Jason. Thanks to do all the changes. Let´s start your second review: Name: Jason Brash Legion ID: 86557 Forum Name: Volksjager Garrison: Desert Scorpion Garrison Helmet a. Green lenses: check b. Paint color of traps / tears: check c. Correct number of teeth: check d. Mic tips: check e. Vocoder color: check f. Tube stripes: check g. Rank bar on ears: check h. Brow: check i. Side screws (ears). Check j. Weathering: check Result on helmet: Checked and Cleared! Armor details a. Elastic straps shoulders: check b. Neck seal: check c. Black undersuit: check d. Shoulder bells: check e. Biceps: check f. Forearms: check g. Pauldron: check h. Chest / back plate: check i. Kidney / butt plate: check j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check k. Strapping system: check l. Thighs: check m. shins / calves: check n. sniper plate: check o. boots: check p. gloves: check q. hand plates / guards: check r. ammo belt (waist): check s. ammo belt (right knee): check t. canvas belt: check u. pouches: check v. weathering: check (i like your weathering!) RESULT ON ARMOR Checked and Cleared! Weapon a. details: Check b. weathering: check RESULT ON WEAPONS Checked and Cleared! Backpack a. details: check and cleared b. weathering: check RESULT ON BACKPACK check and cleared comments: the PO-pack is great. You have changed the bottles. If it should look even better, change the pudding caps against the rubber cups. They are a little bigger and it looks better. I know, you will do it! And so: Jason, this was you’re final review, great work, congrats brother! You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements, be proud of yourself. Now, you are a member of the Police Officers, the Elite Troopers of Tatooine! It is hard work, but it is worth! Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away. We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon. Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared. Bigwam - MEPD Deployment Officer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hausi Posted July 15, 2018 Share Posted July 15, 2018 Congrats mate! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volksjager Posted July 15, 2018 Author Share Posted July 15, 2018 Excellent news! Thanks for the quick response and I am very happy to be deployed! You are right Bigwam, I will upgrade to the plunger cups for the bottles as well, will look even better. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthStevius Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 Congrats Jason. Another Aussie PO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dutchy Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 Well deserved and congrats! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airborne Trooper Posted July 16, 2018 Share Posted July 16, 2018 Congratulations!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Markus ' tiny ' Zeitvogel Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 Congratulation Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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