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Ok Jason. Let´s  start your review:

 

Name: Jason Brash

Legion ID: 86557

Forum Name: Volksjager

Garrison: Desert Scorpion Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears). Check

j. Weathering: check

Result on helmet:

Checked and Cleared!

 

Armor details

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: check

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check (i like your weathering!)

RESULT ON ARMOR

Checked and Cleared!

 

Weapon

a. details: Check

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON WEAPONS

Checked and Cleared!

 

Backpack

a. details: read comments

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON BACKPACK

pending

There are two things on the Backpack, we have to talk about:

First, like Jason said, the bottles are to long. Look, they are shorter and thicker.

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And the second: i miss the disc behind the radar dish:

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Your Packbuilt is great. But these are two little things, which you should still change for your po-pack.  Not many work, but a clear improvement.

We will see you soon for your second review!

Thanks, bigwam.

 

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Hmmmm, i studied some Film pics and i´m not sure, if there is a disc behind the radars dish. I almost want to say:  no.

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So, no disc is ok - but change the bottles.

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Thanks for the speedy review! I will make the changes and be back ASAP. 

I am glad you mentioned the no disc look as I though I had read that somewhere so I will remove my backing plate and will change the bottles. 

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Bottles are done, now shorter and thicker than before. 

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Both requested item’s have now been rectified. Please let me know if there is anything else you would like me to change.

 

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Good morning Jason. Thanks to do all the changes. Let´s  start your second review:

 

Name: Jason Brash

Legion ID: 86557

Forum Name: Volksjager

Garrison: Desert Scorpion Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears). Check

j. Weathering: check

Result on helmet:

Checked and Cleared!

 

Armor details

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: check

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check (i like your weathering!)

RESULT ON ARMOR

Checked and Cleared!

 

Weapon

a. details: Check

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON WEAPONS

Checked and Cleared!

 

Backpack

a. details: check and cleared

b. weathering: check

RESULT ON BACKPACK

check and cleared

comments: the PO-pack is great. You have changed the bottles. If it should look even better, change the pudding caps against the rubber cups. They are a little bigger and it looks better. I know, you will do it!

And so:

 

 

 

Jason, this was you’re  final review, great work, congrats brother!

 You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements, be proud of yourself. Now, you are a member of the Police Officers, the Elite Troopers of Tatooine! It is hard work, but it is worth!

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared.

 

Bigwam - MEPD Deployment Officer

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Excellent news! Thanks for the quick response and I am very happy to be deployed! 

You are right Bigwam, I will upgrade to the plunger cups for the bottles as well, will look even better. 

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