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*done* TD-64531 Requesting Deployment

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Great work! Glad to see more and more PO applications come in!

A couple things I noticed that you may need to adjust before your review.

1. Are your gloves the rubber chemical gloves? They appear to be cloth or leather

2. The hand plates, are they hard plastic or the rubber latex kind, need to be the latex, or rubber kind

3. Your rivets on the side of your ab/kidney plate look to be a little large

4. Are your shoulders straps canvas or elastic? They should be elastic

5. It looks like you are missing the srapping system screws on your chest piece.

6. Your shoulder pouch may need to be swapped for a canvas pouch, Im not sure, thats up to the DOs

And in general, I would tone down the weathering in a few spots. Maybe hit the darker patches with some light tan or unbleached titanium white. It will help sell it more as sand and dirt than wet mud. When it comes to Sandtrooper weathering, less is more is the best approach. 

I know it sounds like a lot, but they aren't too difficult, it will make your costume look that much better! Great work! 

Your blasters look great! Love that DLT19!

 

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As John says. I would also cut the Mortartube a bit. And the E-11 needs more dirt. The shoulder Pouch can be made of leather, why not.

 

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All in all you have a great kit.  Like @henselmonstersaid, you might have a few changes but nothing too difficult.  Best of luck with your application.

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this button should be sewn on!

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Are there washers under the screws? If yes, please remove them.

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Looks better. Note: the diameter of the rivets is 8mm

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Nice kit! Great to see more PO's..

 The one thing that jumped out to me was your filter. The tubes are a bit too big. They should be closer to .5 cm in diameter. 

 Good luck!! Your well on your way.

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I AM SORRY FOR REMARKS IN THE AMENDMENTS.

ADJUSTED AMENDMENTS ON THE HELMET AND FITTED SYSTEM SCREWS ON THE BELL AND BROWN CHEST.

 

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Ok Krzysztof, lets start your first review, to become a Police Officer. Is it the first and last Review? Lets see ..

 

 

Application Review: Part 1

Name: Krysztof Wencel

Legion ID: TD-64531

Forum Name: TD-64531

Garrison: Polish Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: please show me a detail pic of your green lenses

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

pending

 

Armor details

 a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: what is the diamtere of th six rivets? The right diameter (look in the crl´s is 8mm)

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: are these rubber / chemical gloves?

q. hand plates / guards: you need a handplate, made of latex

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON ARMOR

pending

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

*additional comments*

If your backpack should look a bit more accurate - paint the blue things greyblue.  It looks better.

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

*additional comments*

When your DLT is your first weapon, it is ok. When you troop with your E-11 put some weathering on it.

RESULT ON WEAPON

Checked & Cleared

 

Ok, so the first Review is done. There are some points to do, but no really hard work.

Regards bigwam.

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Hello, I'm sending pictures of green lenses. Rubber chemical gloves, plus silicone covers. Blaster E-11 battered. New rivets on the left side

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Ok Krzysztof, this is your second review. I'll keep my fingers crossed!

 

Application Review: Part 2

Name: Krysztof Wencel

Legion ID: TD-64531

Forum Name: TD-64531

Garrison: Polish Garrison

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

checked and cleared

 

Armor details

 a. elastic straps shoulders: check

b. neck seal: check

c. black undersuit: check

d. shoulder bells: check

e. biceps: check

f. forearms: check

g. pauldron: check

h. chest / back plate: check

i. kidney / butt plate: check

j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: checked

k. strapping system: check

l. thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: checked

q. hand plates / guards: checked

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

Please put some weathering on your handplates. I will think, you do it, so i give you a "checked!

RESULT ON ARMOR

checked and cleared

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

*additional comments*

If your backpack should look a bit more accurate - paint the blue things greyblue.  It looks better.

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Checked & Cleared

 

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

*additional comments*

RESULT ON WEAPON

Checked & Cleared

 

Krysztof, this was you’re  final review, great work, congrats brother!

See you at Legoland Günzburg this weekend?

 

You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements, be proud of yourself. Now, you are a member of the Police Officers, the Elite Troopers of Tatooine! It is hard work, but it is worth!

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared.

 

Bigwam - MEPD Deployment Officer

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Congratulations Trooper! :duim:  well done!

 

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YES YES YES YES Thank everyone for the time spent for me. I will be honored with the MEPD badge. To the Glory of the Empire.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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