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Hello friends, please bear with me, this be my PO submission:

Vincent William

TD-17778

http://501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=23804

m4vrick

Garuda Garrison Indonesia

Pardon my non smiling picture.. been a long day :)

NOTE: (RE-POST 3 Nov 2017): Sorry guys, i just had to toss away the previous pics and post these new ones, since my review hasn't started. I totally wasn't happy with the 1st one. To be honest, that was taken in a haste. So i hope these new pictures will make it easier on the reviewers. 

Two things that changed: 
1. Corrected canvas pouches position on shoulder. 
2. Corrected backpack (pulled higher) to align better. Was slanted at the beginning. 
3. Pulled thighs inwards. They now look better. 

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Backpack: 

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Bucket:

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T-21: 

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Attitude pose:

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Constructive criticisms always welcomed. I hope you enjoyed it. 

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@ Vincent - Your review has begun, Troop! First comments will be posted soon.  :td::duim:

Stand by...

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Hi Vincent, 

Your armor looks awesome, same goes for your pack and I really like your weathering!:duim:

Seems to me that you are going either for the cantina captain or docking bay? I can definitely see your attention to detail although some changes would become necessary as soon as you decide going for SWAT... but not too many;)

Don't forget to add some pics of the six rivets on your left side, codpiece and buttplate rivets, as well as the male backside of the snap on the right side of your abdomen.

The only thing that seems wrong to me at first sight is the shoulder pouch which is sitting way too high, try to move it down.

Good luck with your review mate!

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Thank you @hausi. Yes, i  am trying emulate captain cantina. And thank you for the feedbacks. Will post all the necessary corrections together once the first review comes out. 

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Some more that i missed. I'll just post these now.. 

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Thank you all! 

 

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Good luck!!


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Remove the white paint off the cod piece split rivet. You're armor and pack look amazing! 

Pull up your pack and tighten the straps a tad and that should solve your issue with the pouch being too high! 

Rotate your thighs inwards some as they are facing outwards too much. Very minor issues. 

Add some weathering to that beautiful pack! 

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Hi Vincent,

 

I will start with your review at the weekend!

Thank you and Cheers,

Felice

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Hi Vincent!

 

Welcome and thank you for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer!

Let us start with your Review.

 

Application Review

Name: Vincent Williams

Legion ID: 17778

Forum Name: m4vrick

Garrison: Garuda Garrison Indonesia

 

Helmet

 

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

Armor details

 

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: check

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments* 

RESULT ON ARMOR

Checked & Cleared

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: see comments

 

*additional comments*

Please add some weathering on you pac.

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Pending

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

If you like to go for SWAT you have to change the front nozzle a little bit...

RESULT ON WEAPONS

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

You are pretty close Vince! Just some dirty patrols with your pack und you are in!

Cheers,

Felix

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Thank you fellas ! Pleasant surprise for me this Monday morning. Will get right on the corrections!

Vincent 

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Weathered my pack now. Please let me know if this suffice:

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Thanks

 

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Thank you kind sirs... i’ve already done some preparations for the next level :td: move along... move along

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Hi Vincent!

 

Welcome back to our PO Programm!

Let us start with the second Review...

 

Application Review

Name: Vincent Williams

Legion ID: 17778

Forum Name: m4vrick

Garrison: Garuda Garrison Indonesia

 

Helmet

 

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

Armor details

 

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: check

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments* 

RESULT ON ARMOR

Checked & Cleared

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON BACKPACK

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

If you like to go for SWAT you have to change the front nozzle a little bit...

RESULT ON WEAPONS

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Congrats Vincent!

 

You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.

 

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared

 

FELICE - MEPD Deployment Officer

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Thanks guys... gotta really thank @Felice and the command staff for your time. Sincerely thank you all for your time, you who do your dailies, and yet still spare your time to uphold MEPD's standard for our beloved hobby Star Wars, specifically Sandtroopers ! Salute! 

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