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NAME: Martin Herodek

Legion ID #: TD-22997

Forum Name: Heroma97

Garrison: German Garrison

Deployed Police Officer: Yes

Mos Espa Security Patrol

Trooper Emulated: Captain - Docking Bay 94 Version

Hello Troops. I finished modify my armor and backpack to try to get SWAT. This are my pics and my builtthread:

Tunisia DLT:

Backpack:

Ok, let´s go:

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Some Action Pics:

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Here some comparative Images. The Problem is the reslution here on the PC. On my Handy, i can see more Details, then here on the PC. Also the weathering is stronger on the pics on the Handy and on the TV, than on the PC:

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There is one Problem with the black/White Picture. The contrast is stronger than on the Coloured Pictures or in the Film. Example: It seams, the weathering is stronger on the Pauldron, but in the film it isn´t so. I showed the blackwhite Picture, than the weathering Details are more visible there. The stripe on the right forearm is better visible on some screenshots of the Film.

 

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More Details:

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I hope the Emperor keeps me well enough for his elite Groups.

Thanks, Martin.

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Thanks,

the problem is - When i wear the backpack normal, the distance is correct. You can see this on my PO pictures. But this trooper, has the strap over the shoulder bell and the strap pulls the bell slightly backwards. This makes the gap larger.

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Looking good Martin!  This is the same trooper I emulated in my SWAT application, but Photoshop has shut me down and won't display my photos.  I think you've done a nice job with this... at most, I see perhaps a few tweaks needed in your weathering including the pack, but otherwise very nice.

Good luck with your submission.  Glad to have another Docking Bay 94 coming aboard!

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Hi Martin!

 

I will start your Review with a big CHEERS: Happy Birthday!

 

Your gear is on spot and your emulated trooper is immediately recognizable. But each new SWAT

candidate gets looked at even more so from the previous trooper and the bar gets raised even higher.

You are definitely on the right track though.

As stated before, we always stress patience during this process as we pay more and more attention

to fine tuning with each new SWAT applicant. The MEPD Senior Commanders and myself will give your

armor a full inspection and Review. Some details may definitely be missed and re-checked, but we will try

to catch them on every pass given until you are cleared and ready to join the Special Weapons & Tactics Team,

brother!

With that said, let us begin.........

So let's start......

MEPD SWAT OFFICER: Application review part 1

 

Name: Martin Herodek

Legion ID: 22997

Forum Name: Heroma97

Garrison: German Garrison

ANH Santrooper selected: Captain Docking Bay 94

 

Helmet

Green Lenses: check

Paint Color on Traps / Tears: check

Paint Color and Number of Teeth: check

Mic Tips: check

Vocoder Color: check

Tube Stripes: check

Rank Bar: check

Brow: check

Side Screws (ears): check

Weathering:  check

Specials (ears): check

 

**Additional comments**

Nothing to add. Your bucket is on spot for me:-)

**RESULT ON HELMET**

STAND BY

 

Armor / Suit Details

 

Canvas Straps: check

Neck Seal: check

Black Undersuit: check

Shoulder Bells: check

Biceps: check

Forearms: check

Pauldron: see comments

Chest / Back Plate: check

Kidney / Butt Plate: check

Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod: check

Strapping: check

Tighs: check

Shins / Calves: check

Sniper Plate: check

Boots: check

Gloves: check

Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge: check

Ammo Belt (right knee): check

Canvas Belt: check

Pouches: check

Weathering: see comments

Crotch Snaps: check

 

**Additional Comments**

Left leg: I like to see a Little bit more weathering and different Patterns on your left leg

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The spot on your right thight is a Little bit too strong

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1.  I can't see the spot on the reference picture

2. Like the first Feedback Picture: just Play a Little bit more with the weathering. The left leg is more dirty as the right one

3. Missing the spot on your pauldron

4. Can't finde the spot on the reference picture

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**RESULT ON ARMOR**

STAND BY

 

Backpack

Details: check

Weathering: check

**Additional Comments**

nothing to add. Great pack!

**RESULT ON BACKPACK**

STAND BY

 

Weapon: DLT-19

Details: check

Weathering: check

**Additional Comments**

Welcome to the Bapty World!

**RESULT ON WEAPON**

APPROVED

 

Alright Martin!

The Hardware is on spot. Just some weathering details missing but I think you will add/Change them in some minutes.

Good luck and Cheers,

Felix

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Ok, today - i worked on the weathering. So, let me Show you the result:

First, i removed the spots: Point 1 and 4 on Felix´ list.

Then i weathered the left leg more the the right: Point two on Felix´ list

And i weathered the Pauldron more, with the Spots, he said: Point 3 on the list.

The Spot on the thight, i made him slightly brighter.

And at last - i shortened the Cover stripes on the forearms, like you said.

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Hi Martin!

welcome back to your second Review.
 

MEPD SWAT OFFICER: Application review part 2

 

Name: Martin Herodek

Legion ID: 22997

Forum Name: Heroma97

Garrison: German Garrison

ANH Santrooper selected: Captain Docking Bay 94

 

Helmet

Green Lenses: check

Paint Color on Traps / Tears: check

Paint Color and Number of Teeth: check

Mic Tips: check

Vocoder Color: check

Tube Stripes: check

Rank Bar: check

Brow: check

Side Screws (ears): check

Weathering:  check

Specials (ears): check

 

**Additional comments**

Nothing to add. Your bucket is on spot for me:-)

**RESULT ON HELMET**

STAND BY

 

Armor / Suit Details

 

Canvas Straps: check

Neck Seal: check

Black Undersuit: check

Shoulder Bells: check

Biceps: check

Forearms: check

Pauldron: check

Chest / Back Plate: check

Kidney / Butt Plate: check

Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod: check

Strapping: check

Tighs: check

Shins / Calves: check

Sniper Plate: check

Boots: check

Gloves: check

Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edge: check

Ammo Belt (right knee): check

Canvas Belt: check

Pouches: check

Weathering: see comments

Crotch Snaps: check

 

**Additional Comments**

I am still not 100% happy with your leg weathering on the left side. You used just one (or two) Brown Color(s), right?

Try to add some black Color spottings with the dry brush method.

And please lighten up the two cycles on your right shin a Little bit, ok?
 

**RESULT ON ARMOR**

STAND BY

 

Backpack

Details: check

Weathering: check

**Additional Comments**

nothing to add. Great pack!

**RESULT ON BACKPACK**

STAND BY

 

Weapon: DLT-19

Details: check

Weathering: check

**Additional Comments**

Welcome to the Bapty World!

**RESULT ON WEAPON**

APPROVED

 

Ok Martin, just the Colors and the two circle spots and the Senior Command is your next judge:-)

Cheers,

Felix

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