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*DONE* TD 41274 requesting deployment

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Greetings! TD-41274 requesting deployment

 

Jérôme Fabry

TD-41274

Yooda2004

FanWars Garrison

http://www.501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=21830

 

Thanks.

 

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Hi Jérôme, great looking pack and armour, but I think you should have used white thread to attach the snaps to your shoulder elastics and your forearms could be a little higher.

What kind of pouches are those on your belt?

Good luck with your review!

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Hi,

Thanks.

I can easily change the thread if needed. Might do it anyway...

As for the forearms, I can put them higher also.

The pouches are small spanish pouches. I'm going for Docking Bay 94v1 Sergeant.

 

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Doesn't that one have small Spanish pouches? Yours rather look like the medium pouches. Doesn't matter for PO though.

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3 hours ago, Hausi said:

Doesn't that one have small Spanish pouches? Yours rather look like the medium pouches. Doesn't matter for PO though.

Hausi is right, the ones you have aren't the small spanish pouches...but they aren't a problem for PO.

 

But looking good so far, great job!

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OK, thanks.

I bought them as small spanish pouches though...

I'll think about changing them if I decide to go SWAT but then I think I'll have to redo all of my weathering...

Thanks.

 

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great work Jerome, another thing that you might want to look at is the stinger on your pack. looks a little long to me, but maybe someone here can confirm or deny that better than I as I'm not too sure

 

Overall  great job and good luck 

 

:salute: :duim:

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Hi Jérôme! (it works with ´^ -great!)

 

Welcome and thank you for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer!

Let us start with your Review.

 

Application Review

Name: Jérôme Fabry

Legion ID: 41274

Forum Name: Yooda2004

Garrison: FanWars Belgium South

 

Helmet

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

Checked & Cleared

 

Armor details

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: see comments

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs: check

m. shins / calves: check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments* 

Try to shorten the strapping of both forearms a Little bit and flip the left one into the right direction please

RESULT ON ARMOR

Pending

 

Backpack

a. details: see comments

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

Please shorten the bee stinger a little bit and also the TD Panel on your mortar tube 1-2cm. And just for cosmetics: your labpipe is a

Little bit too Long, too;) 

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Pending

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON WEAPONS

Checked & Cleared

 

Alright Jérôme, just some minor changes and you are in:)

Enjoy the work and the weekend! 

Cheers

Felix

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Hi. 

 

Thanks for the review. 

Bee stinger is shortened, I'll post pics later. 

For the two other comments on the backpack, just to be sure labpipe is the tube that pops out on top of the toolbox

And for the TD panel I have to cut 1-2 cm on the bottom right ?

Forearms shouldn't be a problem, I don't know why the left one turned on one picture 

I'll get on it as soon as possible 

and good job on the accents ;-)

J.

 

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That's correct.:duim:

Not much to do, way to go!;)

 

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Ok, 

Here is the adapted upper backpack

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I'll try to take pictures in full armor in the next couple of days.

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@ Jérôme - Sorry for the delay, Troop! We'll get you squared asap! Stand by!  :td::salute:

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Hi,

Well, I'm sorry for the Delay. I didn't find time to take pictures before leaving for my hollydays, so I'll make them when I get back in late august. 

Sorry about that.

J.

  

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Looks good but I would trip off some of the mortar tube more from the top. Look at the picture of you looking straight at the camera, it should not stick that far up over your shoulder. Check out Strider's latest pack build as he has a ton of references to look at. Trim maybe 1" off the bottom of the thermal det. plate on the tube too. 

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Thanks. 

A little lost here ?

are those comments a requirement for my deployment or just suggestions ?

the length of the mortar tube was not in the first debrief and I already trimmed the bottom of the thermal det plate like demanded. Should I do it more ?

thanks for your feedback. 

 

J. 

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Hey Jérôme, I think it looks really good now but I would agree with airborne trooper that your mortartube could be a little shorter at the top. But all these comments are just suggestions, except for those made by Felice or Scribbler as they are the deployment officers responsible for your review so stick to what they say. 

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OK, Thanks.

I'll wait for their review then and see if I need to shorten the mortar tube. 

It's feasible but a little bit tricky so I want to be sure.

Thanks.

J.

 

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Hi Jérôme,

 

Yes, your mortar tube is a Little bit too Long.

We are not here to make a SWAT Review but our PO Standard is also a very high one in the entire 501st world.

 

So please shorten the mortar tube and you are in.

 

Many thanks and Cheers,

Felix

 

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Hi,

Change made on the mortar Tube. 

Thanks Airborne Trooper for the ref pic, it was a great help.

Let me know if you need anything else.

 

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