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1» Name: Steven Crow    

 TD ID: #  77277  

 Forum name: Das-Stebo   

  Garrison: Alpine Garrison, Utah

 

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Looks good! 

I think you should paint the helmet screws,6 split rivets on the side of your abdomen as well as the one on your codpiece white.

They might also ask you for detail shots of your DLT. 

Good luck for your review!

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Yes have to agree looks real good but get those divest etc painted white and lets one some close ups of the DLT. One thing though, and it may just be the angle, but the bee sting looks a little fat and maybe too high up on the pack?

 

Good Luck and heres hoping you get deployed soon.

 

:duim: :salute:

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Steven,

Looking good trooper, :duim:  A few things i noticed above what the troopers above noticed; (Paint, rivets and screws ect.)

- The biceps, left needs to come up and strait (so the dimple is facing the underarm), right can come up too. 

- Belt can come down maybe 1/2 inch (Dont wanna cover the ab buttons)

- Screws on the return edge must be flat head (Slotted machine style screws) not Phillips (Star) 

 

Command may wanna also see the Ammo belt on the leg armor to show the rounded bottom edge and the rivets used to attach.. 

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Hi Steven!

 

Welcome and thank you for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer!

Let's start with your Review:-)

 

Application Review

Name: Steven Crow

Legion ID: 77277

Forum Name: Das-Stebo

Garrison: Alpine Garrison, Utah

 

Helmet

 

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: see comments

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

Your tube stripes looking too big. Pleas try to paint them a Little bit smaller

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General: the ear trimming is too rough. Try to make it a Little bit smoother

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RESULT ON HELMET

Pending

 

Armor details

 

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: see comments

f. Forearms: see comments

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs:check

m. shins / calves check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): see comments

s. ammo belt (right knee): see comments

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

Please twist the left biceps and forearm into the right Position

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The waist ammo belt is a Little bit too high. I had marked the right Position on the Picture.

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The Position of the knee ammo belt is wrong-please see my Picasso;)

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RESULT ON ARMOR

Pending

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON BACKPACK

Checked & Cleared

 

Weapon

a. details: see comments

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

Please Show me the 4 wires around the t-tracks

Please Show me the disc on the grip

RESULT ON WEAPONS

Pending

 

Alright Steven, you are on the right way. If you have any questions just ask my friend!

Thank you and good luck,

Felix

 

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Screws on the return edge must be flat head (Slotted machine style screws) not Phillips (Star) 

and Chris is right:-)

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ADDITIONAL AND CORRECTION PHOTOS:  

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Thank you everyone for the helpful feedback!

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Great work so far!
But I could suggest something.. Fix you knee ammo belt to the thigh with split rivets instead of screws. Great distance to the back edge, now match the top. Just where Felice placed the red dot.
Looking good and you got this!


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Almost there Steven, only thing I still see is that the wires should go around the T-tracks as they were meant to keep them secured.

Keeping my fingers crossed for you!

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You should trim the excess plastic off above and below the rectangles. The top section is squared off and the bottom has a circular angle. You can use a pipe to get the angle set. 

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Hi Steven!

 

Welcome back mate!

Second round.....

 

Application Review

Name: Steven Crow

Legion ID: 77277

Forum Name: Das-Stebo

Garrison: Alpine Garrison, Utah

 

Helmet

 

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Armor details

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: check

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs:check

m. shins / calves check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON ARMOR

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

 

Backpack

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON BACKPACK

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON WEAPONS

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

 

Congrats Steven!

You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared

 

FELICE - MEPD Deployment Officer

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