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Looking good brother, nice and dirty, the only thing i see that needs to be fixed is where you ab plate meets the back plate on your sides,  they need to be close with little gap, other than that you look awesome

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Your submission is off to a great start and I'm digging what I assume is the homemade pack.  However, you are missing some pictures.  I would recommend going to some of the recently completed submissions and see what pictures they were required to submit so you can get all the pictures you need in.  Good luck!

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Great looking sandtrooper!  Good to read that you are already working on closing the gap between the front and back.

One thing I can't make out of the pictures is if there is a black outline around the bars on the ears.

Backpack looks good to but it's up to our Deployment Officer to  take a closer look.

Overall, excellent work trooper!

:salute:

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Hey Chance, great lookin rig man.

Love the bucket interior, and the back pack with the peek-a-boo radio set up. Makes me wanna go back and redo mine. But i would put snacks in there anyway..lol. All the best on submission brother, and see you in the sandbox soon !!!

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Hi Chance!

 

Welcome and thank you for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer!

Let's start with your Review:-)

 

Application Review

Name: Chance Sanderson

Legion ID: 6921

Forum Name: Chance

Garrison: Star Garrison

 

Helmet

 

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: see comments

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

I just nead a clearer Picture of your tube stripes please-they need to be hand painted. thank you

RESULT ON HELMET

Pending

 

Armor details

 

a. Elastic straps shoulders: see comments

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: check

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: see comments

i. Kidney / butt plate: check 

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: see comments

k. Strapping system: see comments

l. Thighs:check

m. shins / calves check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: see comments

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

shoulder straps: please  Show me a dteail Picture of the elastics

Chest/back plate: please Show me the back plate without the pack

Side rivets ab and cod: I Need so see the male rivet on the top right Hand of the Abdomen and the rivets of the cod piece

Strapping System: I Need to see the screws of the original breast strapping system-don't Need to be functional

Gloves: pleas Show me a Detail Picture of your gloves

Thank you:-)

RESULT ON ARMOR

PENDING

 

Backpack

a. details: check see comments

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

I will give you a pass about your pack because I see the love into your build. That's why we are here...the love to our hobby! But if you like to go for SWAT you have to change some things;-)

RESULT ON BACKPACK

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Weapon

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON WEAPONS

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

That's all! I am happy to see your extra Pictures and changes soon. Thank you and

Cheers,

Felix

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Hi Chance!

 

Welcome back dude and sorry for the delay!

Thank you for doing your homework and thank you for the additional Pictures. Let us start again...

 

Helmet

 

a. Green lenses: check

b. Paint color of traps / tears: check

c. Correct number of teeth: check

d. Mic tips: check

e. Vocoder color: check

f. Tube stripes: check

g. Rank bar on ears: check

h. Brow: check

i. Side screws (ears): check

j. Weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON HELMET

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Armor details

 

a. Elastic straps shoulders: check

b. Neck seal: check

c. Black undersuit: check

d. Shoulder bells: check

e. Biceps: check

f. Forearms: check

g. Pauldron: check

h. Chest / back plate: check

i. Kidney / butt plate: check

j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check

k. Strapping system: check

l. Thighs:check

m. shins / calves check

n. sniper plate: check

o. boots: check

p. gloves: check

q. hand plates / guards: check

r. ammo belt (waist): check

s. ammo belt (right knee): check

t. canvas belt: check

u. pouches: check

v. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON ARMOR

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Backpack

 

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON BACKPACK

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Weapon

 

a. details: check

b. weathering: check

 

*additional comments*

RESULT ON WEAPONS

CHECKED & CLEARED

 

Congrats Chance!

 

You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.

 

Please send the pic you want to use to Luis (Sandman Tigui) and we'll get you squared away.

We will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system very soon.

Congratulations on becoming a Deployed Officer of the MEPD! Now please report to the Mos Eisley Mess hall where you'll serve the troopers until the next newbie gets cleared

 

FELICE - MEPD Deployment Officer

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