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*DONE*TD-34624 Requesting Deployment


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Great looking Sergeant Paulie. :thumbsup: Love this guy. I would blacken the under armor piece a little more, and submit a few more detailed pics as outlined in the submission process. Other than that, this looks like an easy pass and see you in the dunes of Mos Eisley bro....

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Dig the weathering - your armor looks sweet! What helmet is that? TM? I've been pretty proud of my ATA build until I saw your submission... hopefully we both get deployed soon:)

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@ Paul - Welcome and thanks for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer! :td:

Let's begin...



APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1)

Name: Paul Young
Legion ID #: TD-34624
Forum Name: Butters
Garrison: Canadian Garrison



I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Nice construction! Excellent detailing in the interior as well as the exterior. Weathering is top notch.. :thumbsup:



** CHECKED & CLEARED **



II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK --CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK

k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK




** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Great work on your armor & gear, Boot! :td: :thumbsup:

Awesome weathering and attention to the required details.


** CHECKED & CLEARED **



III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Great looking pack! Nice attention to details and requirements appear to have been met. :thumbsup:

One thing, can you post a close up of the bee stinger brackets. I want to check the positioning.

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** PENDING **



IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Nice blaster! But, would love to see that blaster weathered a bit more!


** PENDING **

STAND BY...

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Photo of bee stinger brackets. Brackets were already in place when the boss sent me the pack, I just had to attach the bee stinger to it.

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My E-11 is shiny no more, I dulled it down a bit, can no longer see my reflection in it lol

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Thank You Scribbler :)

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@ Paul - You can now get out there an officially represent! :thumbsup:

On behalf of the MEPD Command Staff, I'd like to officially welcome you to the Precinct! Excellent job, Trooper! :td::thumbsup:


Here are your results:




APPLICATION REVIEW (Final)

Name: Paul Young
Legion ID: TD-34624
Forum Name: Butters
Garrison: Canadian Garrison


I.) HELMET:

CHECKED & APPROVED

II.) Armor / Suit Details:


CHECKED & APPROVED


III.) BACKPACK:

CHECKED & APPROVED


IV.) WEAPON:

CHECKED & APPROVED



** FINAL COMMENTS FROM THE DEPLOYMENT OFFICER**

Great work, Paul! You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department! :td: :yes:


You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.

Now, you can march with the rest of the 'Dirty Bunch' down the halls of the Precinct.. Your locker has been assigned and you are now ready to be placed on the roster among most elite troopers in the Outer Rim Territories.

Your Profile link will be updated shortly.

All I ask of you now is to confirm the Call Sign that you want use.

Also, please send the pic you want to use to either Luis (Sandman Tigui) or Ruggero (P3laton3) and we'll get you squared away. Good?

After we find out who, or what has been building sand castles in front of the Precinct , we will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system. :thumbsup:


Here is your MEPD Profile Link: Butters
Congratulations on being the TWELFTH Deployed Officer of 2014! Now please report to the Jawa Toss Event for Security Detail and await further orders, Boot! :td::salute:


-- "SCRIBBLER" / TD-6985 / MEPD DEPLOYMENT OFFICER

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Thank You so much Scribbler, the rest of the command staff and my fellow dirty bunch, I am very happy to be deployed :) Now time for me to get out there do my bit!

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