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Your Name: Gustavo Adolfo Santizo Paz

Your 501 st TD ID with a link to your 501 st profilehttp://www.501st.com/members/displaymember.php?userID=13625&costumeID=2

Your MEPD forum name Gustavo Adolfo Santizo

Your Garrison Jaguar Outpost Guatemala

Armor AM

Bucket ATA

Boots ebay

Back Pack Dirty Boy

Weapon Darth Voorhees Kit/e-11 Bapty Tunisia Blaster

Pouches Blaster TD 8266 Anthony

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Hola, Gustavo!

Your review has begun, Troop!

We do request that you try to upload your pics directly to this thread. It will be easier for me to review. It also will allow other members to follow your progress.

With that said, your gear looks great so far! :thumbsup:


The only thing that stands out initially is the 'battle scar' detail on the helmet. I will check and confirm with the C.O. and X.O. if this will clear.

*If you need any assistance with pic uploading or specific details, please contact Luis (Sandman Tigui). He will be able to guide you no problem!


Stand by... :td:

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Read my mind Commander ;) I'm chiming personally onto this one as Gustavo is not fluent in spanish so I will give him a heads up for your comments bro. I've personally inducted him into the TD way and have suggested him some changes to make his TD for MEPD Standards, but at the end it's your call dearest Mike ;)

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@ Luis - Gracias, Maestro! Hope you can help out with this one! :td: :salute:

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It seems Mike that Gustavo is having trouble with the limit quota per picture. Any suggestions to make the uploads work?

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@ Gustavo - I managed to upload your pics for easier viewing here on this thread. :td: :thumbsup:

Comments within the next day or so.

Stand by...

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"Gustavo, Mike encontró una manera de subir las fotos acá, los comentarios vendrán en un día o dos está atento. Gracias Mike!!!"

"Gustavo, Mike found a way to manage and upload your pics here, comments will come in a day or so. Thanks Mike!!!!"

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Good luck brother thou I don't think you need it :)

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@ Gustavo - Welcome and thanks for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer! :td:

Let's begin...



APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1)

Name: Gustavo Adolfo Santizo Paz
Legion ID #: TD-8195
Forum Name: Gustavo Adolfo Santizo
Garrison: Jaguar Outpost



I.) HELMET: (SEE COMMENTS)

a.) Green Lenses -- *****
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- *****
c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- *****
d.) Mic Tips -- *****
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- *****
f.) Tube Stripes -- *****
g.) Rank Bar -- *****
h.) Brow -- *****
i.) Side Screws (Ears): *****
** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Excellent looking bucket, Brother! Unfortunately the 'Battle Scar' is not acceptable. *Falls under the category of "Excessive stylization and is not consistent with screen reference material".

Also, in addition to removing the scar detail, you will need to post close up pics of the above details
before we can continue>

Need to see close up pics of front, sides and back of helmet as well. :td:

** PENDING **



II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b.) Neck Seal -- (SEE COMMENTS)
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK --CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)

k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK




** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Great work, Troop! :td: :thumbsup:

There are a few things you will need to take care of in order to clear this section, Troop.

Please post pics of:

1.) Canvas / Elastic Straps
2.) Neck Seal

3.) Upper right Male Snap Ab Detail

4.) Left Side Rivets


** PENDING **



III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Looking good so far! :thumbsup:

Please post close up pics of the front of the pack so we can see the details better.

** PENDING **



IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


You can never go wrong with the standard issue imperial blaster. Very nice!


** CHECKED & CLEARED **

STAND BY...

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@ Gustavo - Thanks for posting the requested pics. :td: :thumbsup:

Stand by...

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@ Gustavo - Thanks for taking care of the requests! :td: :thumbsup:

Let's continue...



APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2)

Name: Gustavo Adolfo Santizo Paz
Legion ID #: TD-8195
Forum Name: Gustavo Adolfo Santizo
Garrison: Jaguar Outpost



I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Nice construction overall, Troop!

The weathering is acceptable for standard deployment, but will need rework if you plan to go SWAT later.


I still need to see the green lenses. (pic with light shining through to show the color is all.)

Everything else is up to spec. Good job! :td:

** PENDING **



II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)

k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK




** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Nice pics! :td:

There is still one section that you must take care before you clear this section:

-- Need to paint Left Side Rivets white and weathered (post pics)


** PENDING **



III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Excellent work!

** CHECKED & CLEARED **

IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:



** CHECKED & CLEARED **

STAND BY...

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Thanks Michael, will translate on your behalf Commander:

Ok Tavo, estás cerca muy cerca ;) Dice Mike que en general haz hecho excelente trabajo y que vas por un gran camino! Necesita ver básicamente dos cosas más:

1 Que pintes tus remaches del costado izquierdo blancos y luego le aplicas un poco de "weathering" para que se vean gastados. Sube las fotos cuando lo tengas.

2 Una foto en donde tus lentes se vean que son verdes. Recuerdo haberte tomado una foto de ello. Lo que puedes hacer es con una linterna alumbrar el interior de tu casco ya que la luminosidad dirá si son verdes o no. Con la luz encendida adentro de tu casco tomas la foto, la subes y listo, muy cerca eh :)

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@ Luis - Gracias, Maestro! :td::thumbsup:

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@ Gustavo - Thanks again for taking care of the final requests! :td: :thumbsup:

Let's continue...



APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 3)

Name: Gustavo Adolfo Santizo Paz
Legion ID #: TD-8195
Forum Name: Gustavo Adolfo Santizo
Garrison: Jaguar Outpost



I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK
** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Great work, Troop! :thumbsup:

** CHECKED & CLEARED **



II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- CHECK
b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK

k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK




** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Outstanding! :td:

** CHECKED & CLEARED **


III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

** CHECKED & CLEARED **

IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK
b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:



** CHECKED & CLEARED **

STAND BY...

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