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Hey Paco!!! Off and running bro.....from what I can tell your build looks to be in line. However, your pack will need some adjusting to maintain the strict screen accuracy required by the CRL for POLICE OFFICER standards. take a moment to review the photo reference thread so you can determine your course of action. good luck brother and if you need guidance let me know

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@ Francisco - Welcome and thanks for your interest in becoming one of the proud officers of the MEPD Deployed!

Nice work! A few tweaks and you'll be set! :thumbsup:

Let's begin...



APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1)

Name: Francisco Izaguirre Garcia (Paco)
Legion ID #: TD-90005
Forum Name: vader paquito

Garrison: Spanish Garrison


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Nice looking helmet! :thumbsup:

It does appear that you have the green lenses, but please post another pic with a light source shining from behind the lenses so we can confirm that.

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II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK --CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards --CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK





** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Looking good! :thumbsup:


1.) Please post a pic of your shoulder straps. Need to see the detail.

Everything else looks good, Paco. Nice work! :td:






III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Pack details for the most part are on point. But, you need to take care of the following for standard deployment...

1.) Tighten up the placements. Make sure the top and bottom seed trays are closer together. (Is your pack frame a bit larger than spec?)

2,) The Cistern should be positioned lower and needs the 'ring' details.

3.) The radar dish should be facing forward (in relation to the pack style you chose.)

4.) The Bee Stinger assemble should ride lower than the frame base level.

5.) The Mortar tube may be a bit too long.

6.) The exhaust Port tube top is a bit too long. You need to shorten a bit.

(Just try to replicate details from the reference pic as close as you can and you should be good to go, Brother! :thumbsup: )

(Photo courtesy of: SCRIBBLER / TD-6985)

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IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Excellent looking blaster. Just need to see a pic of the D-Ring detail.


D.O. REVIEW STILL CURRENTLY IN PROGRESS...

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@ Francisco - Thanks for getting those requested pics posted. Nice work so far! :td:

Just a few more mods and you'll be good to go!

Let's continue...



APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2)

Name: Francisco Izaguirre Garcia (Paco)
Legion ID #: TD-90005
Forum Name: vader paquito

Garrison: Spanish Garrison


I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK

b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK
c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK
d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK
e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK
f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK
g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK
h.) Brow -- CHECK
i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


:thumbsup:

*CHECKED & CLEARED*

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- CHECK

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK
c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK
d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK
e.) Biceps -- CHECK
f.) Forearms -- CHECK
g.) Pauldron -- CHECK --CHECK
h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK
I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK
j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- CHECK
k.) Thighs -- CHECK
l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK
m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK
n.) Boots -- CHECK
o.) Gloves -- CHECK
p.) Hand Plates / Guards --CHECK
q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK
r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK
s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK
t.) Pouches -- CHECK
u.) Weathering -- CHECK





** Additional Comments --


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


:thumbsup:

*CHECKED & CLEARED*





III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)
b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:


Need to make a few minor adjustments. The goal here is to close the gaps as best as you can.

1.) Move the radio up a bit

2,) Move the upper left tool box and middle cannister down a bit as well

3.) The exhaust Port tube is still a bit too long. You need to trim a bit off the top.

(Just try to replicate details from the reference pic as close as you can and you'll be set!) :thumbsup:

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IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK

b..) Weathering -- CHECK


A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

:thumbsup:

*CHECKED & CLEARED*

D.O. REVIEW STILL CURRENTLY IN PROGRESS...

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Great work, Paco! :thumbsup:

Welcome to the Precinct! Stand proud and start representing, Trooper! :td::thumbsup:


Here are your results:




APPLICATION REVIEW (Final)

Name: Francisco Aguirre (Paco)
Legion ID: TD-90005
Forum Name: Vader Paquito
Garrison: Spanish Garrison


I.) HELMET:

CHECKED & APPROVED

II.) Armor / Suit Details:


CHECKED & APPROVED


III.) BACKPACK:

CHECKED & APPROVED


IV.) WEAPON:

CHECKED & APPROVED



** FINAL COMMENTS FROM DEPLOYMENT OFFICER**

Congratulations, Paco! You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department! :td: :yes:


You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.

Now, you can march with the rest of the 'Dirty Bunch' down the halls of the Precinct.. Your locker has been assigned and you are now ready to be placed on the roster among most elite troopers in the Outer Rim Territories.

Your Profile link will be updated shortly.

All I ask of you now is to confirm the Call Sign that you want use.

Also, please send the pic you want to use to either Luis (Sandman Tigui) or Ruggero (P3laton3) and we'll get you squared away. Good?

As soon as we assign a new Mess Hall Officer, we will have your updated information uploaded into the MEPD system. :thumbsup:


Here is your MEPD Profile Link: VADER PAQUITO

Congratulations on being the TWENTY-FIRST Deployed Officer of 2013! Now please report to the Womp Rat Petting Zoo to assist with Security and await further orders, Boot! :td: :salute:


-- "SCRIBBLER" / TD-6985 / MEPD DEPLOYMENT OFFICER

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