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*REVIEW IN PROGRESS*TD-12370 Requesting Deployment


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Name: Dariusz Sterna

501st TD ID - TD 12370 http://www.501st.com...883&costumeID=2

MEPD forum name: sternik

Garrison: Polish Garrison

construction of armor http://forum.mepd.ne...wtopic=11886=

construction backpack http://forum.mepd.ne...pic=11887&st=20

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Wow! Lookin good. Just a few things of questions? The backpack needs the boxes closer together. The legs? Have a large gap, between thigh and knee. You must be tall. You will get there soon. Keep up the good work

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@ Darek - Lookin' good! Your application review will begin shortly. Comments and mod requests (in addition to those already made by the C.O.) will be posted before week's end.

Stand by...

*Nice pack style you've chosen there, Troop! Here is a shot of the pack I built of this version. Please feel free to use this as one of the many references to help get your pack version as accurate as possible!

Also, Jay and Rick are right on the money...a couple of minor adjustments and you'll be aces! :td::thumbsup:

* I also updated your MEPD Profile Status

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@ Darek - Welcome and thanks for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer!

Very nice looking gear you have there, Troop! A few modifications and you'll be ready to be added to the MEPD Roster! :td::thumbsup:

Let's begin...

APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1)

Name: Dariusz Sterna

Legion ID #: TD-12370

Forum Name: sternik

Garrison: Polish Garrison

I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- (SEE COMMENTS)

c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- (SEE COMMENTS)

d.) Mic Tips -- (SEE COMMENTS)

e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK

f.) Tube Stripes -- (SEE COMMENTS)

g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK

h.) Brow -- CHECK

i.) Side Screws (Ears): (SEE COMMENTS)

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Great looking helmet! Just need to see a close up of the lenses (green), tube stripes, mic tips, teeth, side screws, and tears / traps. :thumbsup:

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas / Elastic Straps -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK

c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK

d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK

e.) Biceps -- CHECK

f.) Forearms -- CHECK

g.) Pauldron -- CHECK --CHECK

h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK

I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK

j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK

m.) Sniper Plate --CHECK

n.) Boots -- CHECK

o.) Gloves -- CHECK

p.) Hand Plates / Guards -- (SEE COMMENTS)

q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK

r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK

s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK

t.) Pouches -- (SEE COMMENTS)

u.) Weathering -- (SEE COMMENTS)

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Impressive looking armor! The following are the items of note that need to be taken care of in order to proceed... :thumbsup:

It appears that you are a tall trooper, which explains the gaps between the armor (i.e. Thighs and Shins) You can probably lower the thighs a bit (The pouches will help hide the gaps up top) and maybe pulling up the shins a bit. You can experiment with that. Very nice armor build nonetheless!

1.) Need to see close up pics of your shoulder straps, left side rivets,ab snap (right side) and hand plates

2.) You must have at least ONE accurate looking pouch. The 2 (french style) side pouches may be acceptable for standard Officer deployment, but you have to have an accurate MP-40 or Canvas shoulder pouch in combination with what you have. The current pouches you have are not enough to meet requirements.

3.) The weathering looks a bit to 'spotty / blotchy'. If you can tone the patterns a bit, you'll be god to go!

III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Very nice build, Brother. But you need to make a few mods and you'll be set! Again, I know your height is a bit of a factor, but you should be able to make the fixes with no problem! :yes:

1.) You need to close the gap between the top and bottom trays

2,) You also need to tighten up the placement of the pack details. (i.e. the radio needs to be a lot closer to the cistern) Probably need to have larger tubes on the upper left to be in proportion to your cannisters.

IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Your blaster looks great! Just need to see a close up pic of the D-Ring. :thumbsup:

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  • 2 weeks later...

I just got back from vacation. In the next few days I will try to do all the necessary images. The backpack will have to replace Seed Trays for smaller and lower legs I'll be lengthened. Also looking forward to the MP40 ammo pouches on his shoulder.

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