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@ BJ - Thanks for submitting your application for MEPD Officer status. :thumbsup:

Your review has begun and comments/mod requests will be posted within the next day or two.

Stand by... :td:

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@ BJ - Welcome and thanks for your interest in becoming an MEPD Deployed Officer!

Please be patient as I give your armor / gear a full inspection and review. Some details may definitely be missed and re-checked, but I will try to catch them on every pass given it until you are cleared and ready to be deployed as an Officer of the MEPD!

Let's begin...

APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 1)

Name: BJ Savage

Legion ID #: TD-5955

Forum Name: bjsavage7

Garrison: Florida

I.) HELMET:

a.) Green Lenses -- CHECK

b.) Paint Color on Traps / Tears -- CHECK

c.) Correct Number Of Teeth -- CHECK

d.) Mic Tips -- CHECK

e.) Vocoder Color (Black) -- CHECK

f.) Tube Stripes -- CHECK

g.) Rank Bar -- CHECK

h.) Brow -- CHECK

i.) Side Screws (Ears): CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Excellent work! :thumbsup:

** CHECKED & CLEARED **

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas Straps -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b.) Neck Seal -- (SEE COMMENTS)

c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK

d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK

e.) Biceps -- CHECK

f.) Forearms -- CHECK

g.) Pauldron -- CHECK -- (SEE COMMENTS)

h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK

I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK

j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK

m.) Sniper Plate -- (SEE COMMENTS)

n.) Boots -- (SEE COMMENTS)

o.) Gloves -- CHECK

p.) Hand Plates / Guards --CHECK

q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- (SEE COMMENTS)

r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK

s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK

t.) Pouches -- (SEE COMMENTS)

u.) Weathering -- CHECK

v.) Crotch Snaps -- (SEE COMMENTS)

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Great work on your armor, Troop! A few tweaks and you'll be all set for deployment. :td::thumbsup:

Here the areas of note, so far...

1.) Need to see a close up of the front of the belt (waist). Specifically the belt edges. I can see that they appear angled off, but need to make sure.

2.) Although your 3-button configuration (ab section) is acceptable, I would recommend that you position the buttons closer for a more accurate appearance:

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3.) Your pouches meet the standard officer requirements, but you may want to look at upgrading as soon as you are able to the more accurate side pouches.

Every style of pouch is now available for purchase and are quite affordable. Please contact TD-8266 (Anthony) or BOO.

Also, It may be the lighting but your pouches may need to be 'weathered / beat up' just a little bit more.

4.) Need to see a close-up pic of the sniper plate. I want to check the positioning

5.) It appears that you do have the required rivets on the left side, but please post a close-up pic so we can see the detail.

6.) Need to see a pic of the shoulder straps.

7.) Need to see a close-up pic of your boots.

8.) You may want to add the accurate crotch snap detail now if you plan on going SWAT later. (not needed for standard deployment)

9.) Need to see a close-up pic of the pauldron. (surface, weathering details)

10.) Need to see a close-up pic of neck seal. Just want to confirm rib detail. Although it appears that you do have the required neck seal, the lighting makes it look flat .

III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- (SEE COMMENTS)

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

1.) Need to see a close-up pic of the top end of the mortar tube. It appears 'black' (?)

2.) The upper canister needs to be straightened out. (leaning a bit to the right)

3.) Overall, the details of your pack are acceptable for standard deployment, but if you are looking to achieve SWAT status later, you will need to mod/ upgrade a few items. But as it stands, just take care of the mod requests and you should be good to go.

IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

a.) Details -- CHECK

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Nice looking blaster!

** CHECKED & CLEARED **

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Nice Job BJ! Glad too see you gettin Dirty! I would like to see more of your Floridians in Puffy Pauldrons though! Lol

Preferably a trooper1 but ehhh I am not picky! Lmao!

I use one for my IG ;)
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@ BJ - Good work on the mods and for posting updated pics.

Let's continue...

APPLICATION REVIEW (PART 2)

Name: BJ Savage

Legion ID #: TD-5955

Forum Name: bjsavage7

Garrison: Florida

I.) HELMET:

** CHECKED & CLEARED **

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

a.) Canvas Straps -- CHECK

b.) Neck Seal -- CHECK

c.) Black Undersuit -- CHECK

d.) Shoulder Bells -- CHECK

e.) Biceps -- CHECK

f.) Forearms -- CHECK

g.) Pauldron -- CHECK -- CHECK

h.) Chest / Back Plate -- CHECK

I.) Kidney / Butt Plate -- CHECK

j.) Ab Plate / Side Rivets / Cod -- (SEE COMMENTS)

k.) Thighs -- CHECK

l.) Shins / Calves -- CHECK

m.) Sniper Plate -- (SEE COMMENTS)

n.) Boots -- CHECK

o.) Gloves -- CHECK

p.) Hand Plates / Guards --CHECK

q.) Ammo Belt (Waist) w/ correct Angled Edges -- CHECK

r.) Ammo Belt (Right Knee) -- CHECK

s.) Canvas Belt -- CHECK

t.) Pouches -- CHECK

u.) Weathering -- CHECK

** Additional Comments --

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Almost there, Brother... :thumbsup:

1.) Need to raise the Sniper Plate a bit (see ref pic)

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2.) Need to touch up the ab side rivets with a white/off white coat (similar to what you did with the kidney side rivets)

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** Suggested upgrades / mods for a more accurate TD appearance or for future interest in SWAT status:

1.) Pauldron (See Trooper 1)

2.) Reposition small tool pouch on your Shoulder MP-40 / Get the correct side pouches (See TD-8266 or BOO)

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3.) Trim / shape the top edge of your thigh armor to match the shape of the screen version

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III.) BACKPACK:

a.) Details -- CHECK

b..) Weathering -- CHECK

A.) DEPLOYMENT OFFICER:

Looks a lot better! :thumbsup:

** CHECKED & CLEARED **

IV.) WEAPON(S): E-11

** CHECKED & CLEARED **

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OK. Here's some updated pics of the sniper plate & side rivets. I moved the plate up a bit & painted the rivets white. I'll work on the SWAT requirements when I get a few other projects done. ;)Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image

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Fantastic job on your gear, BJ! :thumbsup:

Welcome to the 'Dirty Bunch'! Make us proud, Troop! :td::thumbsup:

Here are your results:

APPLICATION REVIEW (Final)

Name: BJ Savage

Legion ID: 5955

Forum Name: bjsavage7

Garrison: Florida

I.) HELMET:

CHECKED & APPROVED

II.) Armor / Suit Details:

CHECKED & APPROVED

III.) BACKPACK:

CHECKED & APPROVED

IV.) WEAPON:

CHECKED & APPROVED

** FINAL COMMENTS FROM DEPLOYMENT OFFICER**

Congratulations, BJ! You are now an officially DEPLOYED OFFICER in the Mos Eisley Police Department! :td: :yes:

You have done an outstanding job on your armor. You have successfully followed the guidelines in regards to the MEPD CRL and have met the requirements.

Now, you can march with the rest of the 'Dirty Bunch' down the halls of the Precinct.. Your locker has been assigned and you are now ready to be placed on the roster among most elite troopers in the Outer Rim Territories.

Here is your Profile link: http://www.mepd.net/deployed/td-5955/

All I ask of you now is to confirm the Call Sign that you want use.

Also, please send the pic you want to use to either Luis (Sandman Tigui), Ruggero (P3laton3) or myself and we'll get you squared away. Good?

Once we find out who went to Tosche Station and stole all of their Power Converters , we will then have your badge, picture, updated profile link, and proper information uploaded into the MEPD system, so hold tight a little bit more, ok? :thumbsup:

Congratulations on being the TENTH Deployed Officer of 2013! Now please report for Thermal Detonator testing at the Lars Homestead (for now) and await further orders, Boot! :td: :salute:

-- "SCRIBBLER" / TD-6985 / MEPD DEPLOYMENT OFFICER

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