Hi Vincent,
Your armor looks awesome, same goes for your pack and I really like your weathering!
Seems to me that you are going either for the cantina captain or docking bay? I can definitely see your attention to detail although some changes would become necessary as soon as you decide going for SWAT... but not too many
Don't forget to add some pics of the six rivets on your left side, codpiece and buttplate rivets, as well as the male backside of the snap on the right side of your abdomen.
The only thing that seems wrong to me at first sight is the shoulder pouch which is sitting way too high, try to move it down.
Good luck with your review mate!