Nice work! I would recommend embedding each photo in the post but this is fine for now.
Great work with your armor, there are some minor issues but nothing that should impede your approval, and if it does it’s minor adjustments. Though I would recommend a different pauldron. The pauldron should be the puffy leather kind, yours is a bit flat. You may want to do that before approvals, but it’s not specifically called out in the CRL (though it probably should be).
Should you want to proceed with higher level approvals there are some changes needed but we can cross that bridge when we get to it!
Best of luck!