Hi Lars,
welcome and thank you for your interest in wanting to join the MEPD´s finest and becoming a deployed officer.
Your gear looks great (almost SWAT-ready?) and since you have got yourself a backpack (which you have built quite quickly), we can start your review.
So here we go
Application Review: Part 1
Name: Lars Boller
Legion ID: TD-90874
Forum Name: larsb
Garrison: German Garrison
Helmet
a. Green lenses: check
b. Paint color of traps / tears: check
c. Correct number of teeth: check
d. Mic tips: check
e. Vocoder color: check
f. Tube stripes: check
g. Rank bar on ears: check
h. Brow: check
i. Side screws (ears): check
j. Weathering: check
k. no mesh behind teeth: check
*additional comments*
Nice Helmet, one can see that you have put a lot of effort into it and it is immediately recognizable as the Cantina/Garindan/Docking Bay Captain, well done. RESULT ON HELMET
Checked & Cleared
Armor details
a. elastic straps shoulders: check
b. neck seal: check
c. black undersuit: check
d. shoulder bells: check
e. biceps: check
f. forearms: check
g. pauldron: check
h. chest / back plate: check
i. kidney / butt plate: check
j. ab plate / side rivets / cod: check
k. strapping system: check
l. thighs: check
m. shins / calves: check
n. sniper plate: check
o. boots: check
p. gloves: check
q. hand plates / guards: check
r. ammo belt (waist): check
s. ammo belt (right knee): check
t. canvas belt: check
u. pouches: check
v. weathering: check
*additional comments*
Your armor suits you really well and you look great in it.
My only concern is that from up close,in some places your weathering looks very uniform, by saying that, I mean the pattern which has obviously resulted from using paper towels to dab it off again but no worries, it´s fine for PO and mostly not really recognizable as it is in places where one wouldn´t probably notice. RESULT ON ARMOR
Checked & Cleared
Backpack
a. details: check
b. weathering: see comments
*additional comments*
Great-looking backpack and built in such a short time using some original parts, kudos for that achievement mate.
But… it looks too clean. I agree with people saying that this pack shouldn´t be overdone with weathering but yours simply looks factory fresh. Please change that by giving it a wash with some watered-down earth colour, keep it subtle.
RESULT ON BACKPACK
Pending
Weapon:T-21
a. details: check
b. weathering: see comments
*additional comments*
You have done an amazing job scratchbuilding your blaster and it looks beautiful.
But what I said about your pack also goes for your gun: please dirty it up a little bit and make it look used. Take the shine off some of the parts and also add a wash.
RESULT ON WEAPON
Pending
Lars, this was your first review.
There´s not much to do, those small changes will be a walk in the park for you, especially knowing that you´ve built everything yourself. You have already done a tremendous job and I expect to see your new old dirty pack and blaster soon. Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to seeing your improved gear.
Hausi - MEPD Deployment Officer