Hi John, I really like the overall look of your kit, fits you well, but I do agree with jcalus on the chestweathering which still looks a little too solid and to me also too simple, the trooper I´m emulating is wearing the same chest and helmet and I´ve spend quite a lot of time trying to get it right and I´m still not 100% happy with it. I have multiple layers of weathering on my chest, always added some colour, took some of again then added some more...
Your helmet looks really good but I´m afraid you will have to close the two teeth.
I also think that you will have to take off the UK Garrison decal (not allowed for SWAT)
That´s an awesome DLT! Who is the maker? Just one thing: it looks factory-fresh: add some weathering to it
Good luck with your review!