Hello Paul,
welcome and thank you for your interest in becoming an MEPD deployed officer! I see, you´re a really dirty boy!
Now it´s time to start your review, so let´s go:
Application Review
Name: Paul Molendijk
Legion ID: 22438
Forum Name: Grunt
Garrison: Dutch Garrison
Helmet
a. Green lenses: check
b. Paint color of traps / tears: check
c. Correct number of teeth: check
d. Mic tips: check
e. Vocoder color: check
f. Tube stripes: check
g. Rank bar on ears: check
h. Brow: check
i. Side screws (ears): check
j. Weathering: check
*additional comments*
RESULT ON HELMET
Checked & Cleared
Armor details
a. Elastic straps shoulders: check
b. Neck seal: check
c. Black undersuit: check
d. Shoulder bells: check
e. Biceps: check
f. Forearms: check
g. Pauldron: check
h. Chest / back plate: check
i. Kidney / butt plate: check
j. Ab plate / side rivets / cod: check ( a little less color maybe )
k. Strapping system: check
l. Thighs: check
m. shins / calves: Look at the comments
n. sniper plate: check
o. boots: look at the comments
p. gloves: check
q. hand plates / guards: check
r. ammo belt (waist): look at the comments
s. ammo belt (right knee): check
t. canvas belt: check
u. pouches: check
v. weathering: check
*additional comments*
Paul, three little things:
shoes: Please paint the rubber again, that he is more white. I know, color does not hold well on the rubber, i used radiator paint.
ammo belt: please fix it a little higher
shins: Please make sure that the gap is completely closed
RESULT ON ARMOR
*pending*
Backpack
a. details: check
b. weathering: check
RESULT ON BACKPACK
I love your Backpack built, absolutely great work!! The details are top class!
Weapon
a. details: check
b. weathering: check
RESULT ON WEAPONS
CHECKED & CLEARED
Paul, three little changes are to do. A few minutes of work but it increases the quality a lot. I like your work. Great Armor, great Weathering, absolutely great Backpack - and: great beard - i love it!!!
I hope, i will se you soon for the second Review!!!
Best Regards,
bigwam